You are a very talented writer . Thanks for sharing your stories.

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I'm more of a clois then a clana but this Lana bashing is over stepping the fan fiction mark to bull shit land! I'm losing small interest in your fan fictions because of this for starters you make Clark a little to ooc for my taste at times the beach chapter between Clark Lana and Lois is over doing it making it suck so just stop with the bashing Clark is too soft to do what you wrote you should have added red kryptonite to the situation and maybe it could have work.

Just finish reading it and it's great. I hope you will continue to update this story.

O-Kay. Any story that has Lana having a girls nite at the Talon with Lois after she saw Lois riding Clark in her car in broad daylight screaming out his name in ecstasy after Lois watched Clark drive off in Lex's Ferrari with 3 hookers and proceed to break the leg of one of them on purpose because they were gonna force him to have a quad with them in order to obtain his seed to leech his abilities cannot even be qualified as fiction, fan-concocted and written or not. It can only be called a Grimm Fairytale, because there is No way in hell anything that happened in the storyline is plausible except in a far, far away land where the impossible occurs on a daily basis and only those with the brain of a toddler believe it.

Ok. Any story that has Lana having a girls nite at the Tal with Lois after she saw Lois riding Clark and screaming in ecstasy in her car in broad daylight

Loved it. Please continue

I really enjoyed this story. I hope that you'll come back to this and finish it off :)

Anyway you will get back to this story and finish it? PPMS

this is a great fic! :D

I spent the last week reading your well written story (even though I know you abandoned it without any resolution). I am still glad I did even though it is a bit frustrating when it was just getting good.

This has to be the most DETAILED fanfiction story I have ever read. Almost too detailed at times. I can't believe how much time you spend just in one scene and how slow you take the story (heck the whole story is only 3-4 days in the timeline, and that covers 37 chapters). I fully expected you to skip ahead a little though out the days events but you didn't...I was half expecting for you to write about every time they went to the bathroom and each of the chores Clark did. It was that detailed. The problem with doing that is that it can get boring at times.

All the scenes you wrote for Lois and Clark were perfect, and enjoyed them throughly. I liked the idea of them hiding there relationship and it was nice that you got to at least have resolution to that storyline (with the exception of Lana but she got her reaction to them when she was drunk, but it still would have been nice to read another chapter of her getting angry as you are obviously a Lana hater...but I can't blame you as she is annoying). I wish I could have read more on the Kent's reaction, as I doubt they would be THAT accepting of a girl living with them who is now dating and having sex with their son. It would have been nice to see them set some ground rules, but I know they were a bit busy at the time.

I know you were making subtle suggestions that Clark wasn't himself during the whole story and the mystery behind that, and it was very disappointing that you never explained why he was going crazy or his attitude was changing so much. I figured it was linked in with that cavern he found in the lake and something that triggered his mood change. Unless some miracle happens and you return to this I doubt we will ever know (unless you decide to summarize where you were going in a wrap up Chapter 38).

I tend not to write reviews for stories, for various reasons but your story deserved it. It brought a smile to my face many times, and it was a delight to find. I wanted to thank you for giving me a great week of reading your story, and I do think you are a gifted writer...and I hope you do continue with other Smallville stories. Thank you again.

Love this story, I hope you decide to come back to it someday, it is absolutely fabulous.

please finish this story

really great story. just refound it. please dont let it die

Great story - you havent updated in a while. please continue