I entirely love this!

ohhhhh I really like this ending. It bittersweet(which is really fitting for this couple). This story is amazing. Me liky a lot!

I swear I’ve read some of this before. . . I’m so glad you started reposting this! I always really enjoy your writing. And I really hope you update soon (not that I’m one to talk. At all.) I really can’t wait to see what happens next!

Hi! I just wanted to say thank you so, so much for this story. I am on a rediscovering J/L ship kick and this has been the highlight of my fanfic binge so far. I know it says that another chapter is coming up, and while I would absolutely love to read another chapter, the end of this chapter is a nice sum-up too. But yeah, thanks for the absolutely fantastic writing :)

Ok, I know you probably never go on here anymore, but I absolutely love your stories. This is my favourite couple ever, and you write their characters so well. I think you should personally consider becoming a writer, because your writing is so beautiful.

Wowowow. That was exactly what I needed after the (exquisitely torturous) darkness of the end of This Is Not Love. Loved this different kind of dynamic between them. In every scenario and every kind of mood, you write them so well. I can't think of any other situation besides being trapped in an elevator that could have forced them to explore that. And wow am I glad I read this once you had edited it and added the two last chapters - the orginal ending would have KILLED me.

This. This is how the movie should have ended. Wow.

Loved it! Please write a sequel!

Loved it!

Can you please right a sequel about their life on the run? Pleaseeeeee?

this chap was so hilarious ;D
cool fanfic!

I Couldn't Stop Reading Until The Very End. Stayed Up All Night To Finish It. This Was Such A Great, Captivating, Sexy, Fun Story. I'll Be Re-Reading This One Over And Over! Don't Stop Writing! :) -Sarah

I love this. Totally terrific take on what could have happened!

Plz write more stories

A really good story..enjoyed it!:)