Interesting. I kept trying to make the numerals into years or months or ages then I realized partway through they are ordering the scenes. Duh! I enjoy the nonlinear mystery. ;)

The iciness Dean feels like an echo is heartbreaking.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review: This was a fun story and you've hit Dean's reactions perfectly. The plot was engaging from start to finish, and although I was (reasonably) sure you weren't going to kill Sam, my heart was in my throat for a few moments there. Well done.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards- Short Story/Pre-series -Jan 2016

A good story, although I got very confused by the re-ordering, but it was an interesting approach that was worthy of the attempt!

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review:
This started off with some confusion, which I see now was your intention. This is a very unique and interesting way to tell a story, and you tell it in a superior writing style- Though I wasn't sure of the necessity in shuffling the time-line as you've done here, I can say with some certainty it was well worth the effort to put the pieces all together. Nice work!

Very very very good! I love how you didn't tell us the story in order. Very awesome! :)

Squii! :D

Great story! :)

Oh my GOD this was brilliant! It took a while for my brain to realize that this was all pieced together as one story (thought it was a bunch of drabbles at first XD), and I'm so impressed! Awesome, this was completely awesome. It's nice to see something different. _ Great work!

That confused the BEjesus out of me.

FAB! loved it. What an interesting presentation style!

Think ima havfta read it again tho.. _

xZx

A.W.E. (stomp clap) S.O.M.E. (stomp clap)

You're awesome! Awesome!

To-ta-lly.

Sorry, but after reading this fic a few times (after the initial WOW wears off and I can start to get into the down and dirtiness of the story) I'm still left with that cheer in my head. So many weird things happen in there.

This story was great. From start to finish, which, in this fic, wasn't where one would assume it to be.

Just really well done all around.

P.S. Never, in my entire life was I a cheerleader. Ever.

*crys* thats so sad... and cute x.x scaried me so bad.

What an interesting story! I love the way you split it up into randomness. Very cool. I went back and reread it, and its fun to see how it fits together. Great concept!

Thanks for sharing the Christmas angles of the Winchester boys!

:D

Caroline

Wow. Great story-great characterizations. I could see this on T. and please write lots more!

Wow. You've left me breathless for a second time, Refur.

What an amazing story, just as handsomely clever as the previous one. I had faith that this was not a deathfic since there was no warning, but I gotta admit, I was worried a couple times. Very smart with the hypothermia, and I acually figured out the CPS part a few sentences before it happened. I'm so proud. *Wink*

This is haunting, my friend. Chilling. Stunning. Beautiful.

I'm jealous. *grin*

Excellent job,

emily

Wow! I absolutely love your style of writing. All your stories do a wonderful job of dragging me in and keeping me hooked until the end. The not knowing exactly what was happening/has happened, had me on a rollercoaster. There seemed to be something so...dark about this, but I was surprised to say the least about what really was going on. You always write Dean with the best of 'em. You truly are gifted, and I'm glad I get to read your stories.