I love that you used both of their POVs to describe the story. They flowed well together, and helped the reader understand what was going on in both of their minds. Awesome job!

OMFG! This was the perfect story! I can't even believe in how much I loved this! Well written, funny, and soooo sweet! I'm still squealing! Thank you so much!

and the fan girls shriek!oh HELL yes! I cannot even describe to you how happy this chapter made me! Looking forward to the rest!

nice

I liked this!

Cute, but short.

I personally got a bit confused with the POV changes, but apart from that, well done.

~A.k.u.r.a.

Very good! Thank-you very much for sharing!

I love the 2 Povs just needs. A separator

luv the unique way u did this hope more in future.

The eat u portrayed kakashi was unusual and cute.

Pllease try to write more FICs along the same vein.

i love how you wrote their name and then

-sensei

it made it so adorable

Oh jesus, I don't think I've ever read a story that's made my eyes water lol that was so adorable! I felt so bad for Kakashi but at the same time I wanted to smack him round the head xD Great story !

Oh, that was so adorable! I love a shy Kakashi and an irritated Iruka! That's the best!

Shy, socially awkweird Kakashi is absolutely adorable.

Oh kakashi, you're so cute. In an utterly creepy way. (Seriously, what he hell makes you think its okay to watch Iruka from his window?) So well written!

Aw, so sweet! And kakashi! So hesitant and pessimistic and sad and lovely and awesome. The constinat reminders to himself that Iruka was to be called Sensei, and he wasn't that close to him, were just so sweet and sad. Good job.

...stupid lovers. i really liked the change of POV, it made things much more interesting! good job!

~toodles

I'd like to read that Icha Icha...a school teacher and the school security guard? Hot Damn. The pony tail's a nice touch too.