Oh, i love you, baby of monkey fist.

Lovely, as always!

I read the original version of this as well and as much as I liked the first version, I DO like the small changes you've made.

Can't wait to read on! ]

~Your Demolition Lover (formerly known as KPwannaB, years ago)

Please continue so far!

I have read the earlier version of the story and liked it very much.

Of course I'm still reviewing. Looks like you're having formatting problems though. It's cutting off sentences, and making them new paragraphs.

I must say, I was wondering what happened to this. I know this isn't the standard fare that most enjoy, but I always thought this story was deeply emotional. I hope to see it resolved finally!

Eagerly awaiting more!

Keep on going. I like what i see so far. :)

hey kt

i like it!

your inspiring me to redo my own.

please keep this one up. this is the first Fanfic i have read in about six months...

I know why, too many monkeys. *grin* Glad to see you're going to finish this. Mine looks silly without it. Much better this time around.

Good first chapter. I remember the other one and it was good. This version is a little bit cleaner I'll be interested to see if there are any other changes in the story.

I don't remember reading the first version, I have reading so many KP stories I can't keep them straight.

Anyway, it is a nice beginning, not too edgy yet, just laying the ground work.

Good chapter.

Thanks