Really good!

what a happy ending, it's hillarious

this chapter is so fun. im cracking up here n there. love it.

Oh this story made me laugh, cry, yell, jump for joy, you name it, it did it! THIS IS WHAT I WISH THE SHOW HAD DONE! Don't think there was a part i didn't like, (minus Sam, but that's forgiven) this is now added to my favorites and hope you do more 70s in the future. Read ya Later ;)

There are so many things I loved about this story! The friendship that Eric and Jackie struck up when he was in Africa-i always thought that could have been better explored.

Jackie as a mechanic was awesome

Always adore seeing more of Leo.

The gang working together to bring Jackie and Hyde back together was so great. From Eric returning to the hospital wedding it was all so fun!

This is an adorable, wonderful story. I love how u write their friendship staying strong and supporting each other. I enjoyed your witty notes too. Keep on writing!

How about Donna getting pregnant or their wedding reception?

This story is fantastic. I love how you went about bringing Jackie and Hyde back together.

Operation Millenium Falcon! I love it! Eric is his usual nerdy self, and as a fellow Star Wars nerd myself, yes, we find all sorts of ways it creeps up on us in real life. "You know, this is like that part in Star Wars where..."

I have only one criticism. When you change locations/scenes, there should be a better divider, like a line going across the page. It would help me get a better idea of where the action was taking place. Other than that, this is a fast-paced, fun love story that is going to take a turn for the naughty. I can feel it!

So original. I like the recurring letters theme. I always felt Jackie was smarter than how she portrayed herself. Let me guess. That kiss is in your top 5, too? I liked that. He's so clearly not over her and it's going to take Eric coming back early to help him win her back. Also, J/H aside, I like what you've done with Jackie and Eric's relationship. They didn't spend too much time together on the show, but it seems so in-character that he would want to help her out like this. He may have had his differences with her, but he was the first to point out just how happy Hyde was when he was with her.

Pretend I'm Red as I write this:

Good job!

Aww what a beautiful story! I am so glad that you and so many other writers are correcting the mistakes that the writers of the show made. Jackie and Hyde are meant to be. bottom line. Great job!

Awe that was a really sweet story. You should do a oneshot of fez and laurie actually having a kid or of donna and eric having a kid and jackie and hyde doing the whole plan thing that they did to them. Great job really. Wonderful story.

I'm so sad it's over :( this was a wonderful story and I can't wait for the one-shots, you did a great job!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! You better keep your promise...I'm not ready for this story to be over! :D