*spazes*

ahh, I could FEEL that room! I could FEEL it, I could HEAR the machines, I could SMELL it! Ahh. *faints from overdose of joy*

This was really very well done! I thought the part about the scars from childhood was very well done. Now that they're older, the scars are emotional and it's the world that's inflicting them! (at least, taht's what I got out of it)

I also loved the parts of the Aquarian Age. The manga really doesn't talk much about it and I've always wondered what Itsuki's part in the Aquarian Age was. I really liked the way you did it!

Glomps from Foolish Mortal!

interesting...are you going to do more with the JO characters?