I love Kaito! He's such a sensitive person and knows how to cheer people up!

Awwwww

Definitely an interesting scene. Still, you really need to take a metaphorical broom and beat the the typos and painfully bad English mangles out. Seriously.

and what was the elegiac truth Kaito hid within his set-up?

when did kaito become to wise lmao :D ! love it

and i bet if they all be came best friend (which i constantly wish it will happen lol) they would act like that. :D

i think you should continue with the story answer some questions about why ran said no and yeah kudou wants to go o american. (i think he should work for the fbi; it's only fitting considering there past relationship.

and what was the rose thing? id that who they didn't fall asleep?

this is great! i love how the high school detectives are suddenly friends with kaito.. the story is well-written, although i must admit that i didn't get the rose part. keep writing!

it is a lovley story

Yay! It's poetry abound. So thoughtful. I love Kaito. He's SO magical. I also love it when Hakuba, Hattori, Kaito, and Shinichi are together. They're so great! By the way, do they have a nickname or something, so I don't have to keep writing all of their names? Great story.

I LOVE THIS. How badass would it be if the ending to the series was like that? XD

Very nice. :) I love it.

Kaito kept eating and when he was finished, he took the empty plate and balanced it on his nose.

“Oi, oi! Kaito! You shouldn’t be doing that! Stop before the other customers and manager-san might see you! Experienced as you are, the plate might fall!” said a very worried Shinichi, who tried to snatch the plate from his friend. Saguru and Heiji did the same.

“Kaito! The plate might fall and break!” said Shinichi, exasperated.

Kaito turned to Shinichi and said, “Really?” and the plate fell. The clatter that reverberated throughout the quaint, dimly lighted café made Watson feel uneasy and she started creating a hubbub. The other guest were curious enough to check out what’s happening at their table and started whispering things like, “Kids today aren’t disciplined…” and “Kids today are such show-offs…”

The manager heard the noise and started to walk towards their table.

“Kaito!” the three detectives screamed in anger.

“The manager’s coming! Oh no! Bye, bye free meal!”

”Aren’t you mature enough to know not to play with plates – Ever since we were in high school you – ”

“Kaito, you were trying to show me something, were you?” suddenly asked Shinichi.

Kaito smirked, his poker face still on.

“Kudou-tantei, I broke the plate. Sumimasen. And it’s not your fault, ne? Plates like that one break everyday, everywhere.” And as he said this, sounds of breaking plates erupted from every table, and even in the kitchen. It was pandemonium and the women started shouting.

“It is up to you…” Kaito continued, “If you will let the shards hurt you… But bleeding is cleansing, too, once in a while.” He said and the others were stunned.

Yoshimi- That is amazingly profound...I love it...bad things happen anywhere, at any time. But I still don't understand the rose part...what was the meaning in that?

Yoshimichi- ...who cares...

Yoshimi- The world!

Yoshimichi- *sigh*

-Yoshimi Kurosaki

Yoshimichi Kurosaki

(PS- Do you mind if I put that on my FF profile. I would credit you and everything! I'll even say what story it's from! PLEASE! It's so good!)

I think the stories that come from this category have got to be the most in-character of most any I've ever read, surprisingly enough. And you've only served to prolong that tradition, congratulations. A wonderful story bit, and I truly enjoyed the amount of intelligence you gave Kaito.

great pairing! I love it! see u in Knightus' cbox! XD

wow... that's unexpected. oh well, it was a great story! i just love stories with endings that seem incomplete but in a way that makes it mysterious yet beautiful.

aw, this is so cool!

the four beings friends and all~ so nice-

great job!-