Love it! I always enjoy Shanks and Luffy moments.

I like it. Can't stop smiling. And at the perfect view of Luffys and Shanks relationship. When they meet again will it be obvious to both crews the depth of the relationship?

So sweet! I loved it!

very nice, made me smile at the end :)

I love Shanks. I was wondering what happened to Ben, though, I don't think I saw him... (doesn't know how far you've read)... er...

Anyway! This is just the type of thing I'd imagine Shanks would do, he's so sweet when it comes to Luffy. C:

That was not only sweet. It was awesome. It really fit with the characters and I could totally picture it happening.

So yeah, I loved it! Well worth the read!

Cheers!

This fic was so cute that now I'm going to need something sour (or possibly angsty) to balance it out. Great job! :3

Hehe, that was cute! And creative too. Good job. .

loved it!

Heehee! I can DEFINITELY see that one happening! Nicely written, once again!

Oh bravo that was excellent! I really enjoyed the humour behind this story, it was well thought out _

This was so sad at first... The opening line was my favorite.

The way that Ben looks on, reflecting, while he watches Luffy and Shanks was really touching.

I laughed out loud, though, at the end. I can see Shanks doing that-telling Luffy he can do something he really can't, just to cheer the boy up. Oh, that was hilarious. I hope he learned how to, or else he's in for it... *pauses* No, wait, probably not, since Luffy's easily distracted and very gullible.

Oh dear God, this was so well done! I really loved it! I wanted to cry and laugh at the same time.

Ah, I love it. Well done! You made my day with this!

lol, very good! Love how you did this! Well done, lol, I can just imagine Shanks actually trying to do a one handed cartwheel!