Why did you stop?

Before anything, I have to point out something... Immortality does not equal Godly Powers. Immortality means you can get your head chopped off, and you just pop right back up a minute later. OCs always ruin a good DBZ fic in my opinion. Also what arc is this from? It would have made more sense if this was soon after the Buu arc or something, and Shenron could grant 2 wishes instead of 1... I'm rambling, sorry, this is gonna be a bit long maybe.

Also is Gohan gonna freak, or is he just gonna be all cold-rage-that-kills-and-destroys-all-in-path for the duration of Piccolo's death, assuming that Piccolo will be brought back to life somehow? Will they have to wait a year or what? Will Goku be coming back? Will Piccolo stay dead, highly unlikely as it may be? Who's the 'Godess' that offed Piccolo? Is Gohan gonna off her in a brutal way or is he gonna get offed instead? Will Piccolo realize he likes Gohan, or does he know he likes Gohan and is futilely trying to delude himself into thinking otherwise? How long this fic gonna be? Am I rambling? Yes, I believe so. Sorry. If u read this and decide to answer my questions, or at least some of them, my email is .

stupid

this fic failed badly immortality does not give power ideot

a oc always will ruin good stories

please update soon i like this story

please continue

Good story; I can't wait to read more.

This is great! Write more :D lol...no rush...:D just promise to write more. :D

No! Piccolo! Poor Gohan! After that fight too! TT-TT

Gohan needs to find that witch and cut her head off and chop her into little pieces and ki blast her into nothing like he did to Cell!

poor gohan

i enjoyed this. why did the horrible woman have to kill piccolo? boo! also, are you going to continue updating?

wow..this dead-scene was frightening, but good. yet i hope youll bring the big bean back to life soon - he belongs to poor gohan!

I just have one correction for you: Piccolo's blood is purple, not blue.

Other than that, good fiction, except for the fact that you just killed Piccolo. Will he be coming back? Or . . . what are you planning with this?

A tip you might want to use is making another paragraph whenever someone else is talking.

Good job!

luv this pairing!

Also I'm promoting the movie Pan's Labyrinth because I want people to watch it and write Pan(faun)/Moanna(princess) fanfics!