I fully agree with you

Pff, constructive critism, alright.

Naruto and kyuubi merge to become one being: acceptable and can possible see it working out.
Possibly sending Naruto back in time to make some changes or cause chaos, sure go ahead everyone would love to see that happen as long it is somewhat orginal.

Naruto telling others he is from the future, and using some sort of mind control, or possible genjutsu to show what has happened to make them belive him... "YOU FAIL.."
Firstly, he will come of as insane, secoundly they will think he is a spy wich is trying to manipulate them.

You would have been better of making a new identity for him, with a somewhat beliveable background. The story will most likely go downhill from here.

Kai/Kurenai and Naruto/Natsume Aya

naruto/ino and kai/hana and keep typing this story please

not bad, too bad it's not being finished :(

wow that's new for me in the time-traveling kind of fic nice please continu

vote: no one

hey love this story so far, quick question can kai have kurenai, anko and tsunami, i really like all three of thoes girls, it's just to hard to deside. and pluse it would be better for everyone, everyone would like to see kai have four girls, as for naruto i would have to say ino and hinata all the way, no way in hell is sakura going to be the one, i hate her big time, any way i hope you can do that with kai, peace out friend.

if i can still vote i vote for Kai: Tsunami and Naruto: Natsume Aya P.S love your story's update soon pls

for the polls it should be Kurenai and Natsume Aya

Kai/Anko and Naruto/Hinata

im accord with the Kai/Shizune but if that doesnt work a Kai/Anko sounds interesting at least.

im totally devoted to a Naru/Hina... but if that can work i would like a Naru/FemHaku (that is wrth a shot)

Kai/Kurenai and Naruto/Ino

love

kai/Tsunami

naruto/Natsume Aya

love