Hm... I feel like this wasn't thought out enough. First of all, be more careful about grammar. Second of all, it ended too abruptly, without proper detail to make it satisfying. And yet, it was too detailed to be a food for thought story. Sorry, I just didn't like it. Good job on your Wizarding Genealogy, though. :)

this was cute. i would love to see it continued!

I loved it.

It makes me laugh everytime I read it.

Good job.