| Reviews for Bank Job |
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   Shadows-Fallen-Angel chapter 1 . 5/5/2019 chinesse doesnt do plurals. its self( wo) youni) or themta) you are probaly after ta de which is a possesive group not including self or person being talked to |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2017 Oh wow, they're dreaming the same dream! This is interesting... |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/10/2017 Wonderful chapter! :) I really like this story so far! :) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/10/2017 I'm convinced of the opposite, actually. I think he's a REALLY good influence on River. :) Lovely chapter! :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2017 Wonderful chapter! :) |
| supercode chapter 4 . 6/3/2017 Great story! Loved the ending. On to more sequels! |
| SpawnofAnarion chapter 4 . 6/1/2017 Ditto my comment for Kinship. Your work is wonderful. |
| Unidentified chapter 4 . 5/25/2017 Um. That last line with River seemed a /bit/ out of character. And that last bit with Jayne seemed a bit too private. I may drop this series, despite it's quality up to now. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2016 This story is the best |
| arlene56 chapter 4 . 5/31/2015 This one had a really interesting plot. I like the development of the relationships. You write the characters very well. Thanks for sharing. |
| Separate Entity chapter 3 . 4/15/2015 I like that you’re not making everything with River smooth out right away. Great chapter. :) |
| Separate Entity chapter 2 . 4/15/2015 Great chapter! |
| EagleJarl chapter 4 . 4/16/2014 River dreaming sexytime dreams about Jayne and sharing them with him...oh yeah, this is gonna go great. Glad to see the HOBs are dead, and even better that River did one of them herself. Every death is a loss for humanity, but those two weren't a real big loss. Kinda unnoticeably small, actually. I'm sure there are other HOBs though, so they aren't out of the woods yet. |
| EagleJarl chapter 2 . 4/16/2014 Yay! River, we badass mode ON! That was very cool, and I grinned when they got the mail job from the people they had just finished ripping off. Fanty and Mingo did them a real favor by sending that other team along. Also, Zoe: Jayne is NOT a bad influence in River! He was the one that took her shooting and insisted on her being armed on the job. If it were t for her you would not be standing there, alive, unhurt, and loaded down with cash. You would instead be, at the very least, broke and quite possibly shot. So let it go. Yeesh. |
| EagleJarl chapter 1 . 4/16/2014 Yep, here we go. Jayne and River, sittin' in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! First comes love, then comes nookie, then comes Mal and Simon going berserk and pushing him out the airlock. Hm, maybe not such a good idea, actually. |
