I know I'm much too late to really be reviewing this, but I am. I read it in just under a week, but the last half was a real slog. The story had a new and interesting premise and I enjoyed seeing you go for the horcruxes in the way you did.

But this story read like a perverts wet dream. Luna was 15/16 when you had here parading around mostly naked. Hermione's a nudist. Lavender is wearing nothing but a strip of fabric. Every character is basically a slag. Ginny's giving head! And all of this combined with a sanctimonious no sex before marriage vibe. Ick.

In addition, this story was a lot of tell, and almost no show. Interesting story, poor story telling. A lot of actions felt out of character or came out of nowhere. There was almost no challenge for any of the characters. No one of any significance died and everyone got a perfect happy ending.

Thank you for a wonderful story!

Thank You for this wonderful story. Also for my previous comment, sorry if that sounded offensive. It wasn't meant to be and was just a personal rant not directed at anyone.

Chapter 20, lecturer Hermione is back. Because all students have to be alike. Have to be motivated the same way she was, should have same reasons for liking and studying a subject. Because everyone should be scolded for not being studious since she herself is . 'Coz maybe she was targetted in the same way as Harry in potions. 'Coz chastising someone that too in rudest way, that too your fiancee and best friend is such a fascinating thing.

Thank you so much for writing this amazing story. Although I’ll admit I wasn’t thrilled with the Padma quasi threesome thing, it doesn’t detract enough from all the other greatness.

I’m terrible at reviewing each chapter ( still , love your story!

Oops I never review each chapter just the whole story, sorry, just read your authors notes. I can’t thank you enough for writing this it’s such a delight to read.

The team competition was very successful.
I found the way they put together the fighting strategy good.
I liked the ending.
In my opinion Harry always had teacher wood, he would be a much better teacher than Auror (as it is in the canon)
Kira

I love the way Harry tells Hermione that he has learned to understand that he is not always right.
The Halloween party with them in costume seems very funny to me.
Dementors are afraid. It's just a matter of them mentioning that they can destroy them on the opposite side of Tom and not even madmen join him.
It seems to me that Hermioe didn't let loose.
The wait and the first time is impressive if you do it with who you want.
Kira

The talk of the dementors is interesting.
Xeno is a genius. Protect your home with prank products, that man is very creative. There is no better father for Luna than this.
Bellatrix's death is poetic
Molly is dense in that state.
What a gesture by Harry.
I hope that many will survive.
Kira

I liked the guys' proposals to improve Hogwarts.
I feel a little sorry for Molly.
Kira

I also think that Dumby keeping things worsened everything.
Great closing sentence of this chapter.
Minnie is very cute.
Kira

I like that Hermione has a nice conversation with Fleur.
The fight was well described.
Bill is going to have trouble calming down.
Kira

Good two weeks.
I loved that Harry and Hermione studied more specific magic.
What a lovely two weeks.
Ron is quite a case.
How will Ginny act?
Kira

Ginny sounds like a spoiled girl.
I like that little by little Harry opens up a little to his friends.
Kira