I had to laugh at Sam wanting milk. Boys and their milk.

Wonderful!~~~~~

That was so sad yet so amazing...

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Anjel

Oh my God, this was absolutely perfection! Amazing job you awesome author! ;D

Who knew. Glad Sam has Dean. Sam is so independent. But yet vulnerable. Thank you.

Nice ;)

Woah, PLOT TWIST

Wow

Wow, you really captured Dean's caring for Sam so well. How he took him to college and bought him that starting stuff and all and how he knew Sam would want milk.

Poor Sam, I admire his determination but he and Dean really need to clear the air about his leaving.

This story... usually, my response to stories is normal. I don't cry out in surprise, I don't sob in despair. I'm not very reactive, just a passive sigh or a mildly interested thought and I move on. THIS STORY, on the other hand, had me screaming in protest - and perhaps anger - mentally (not aloud only because there were people sitting near me). I cannot even express myself.
Which is another way of saying: I LOVE THIS STORY. It had exactly the right amounts of angst, reality, fluff, sappiness and the absolute perfect ending. I suspected the twist at the end the moment I started the part where Dean returns to the motel, which is a compliment to the way the scene was portrayed because the atmosphere you set up was brilliant; it flowed seamlessly and it really felt sinister to me.
Anyway, before I decide to dissect this story line-by-line, I will end by saying this truly is one of the best things I've read. Ever. Great job :)

Oh my crud that was fantastic

Literally that's all there is to it

Every part of their family is so fucked up. I loved this!

The very last line by dean made me freeze. WTF I was nearly in tears after that one part.

kay...so great story. first off
this is really well written and truly hits home with how much dean and john care about sam despite everything
however
while I realize that the last line was meant to be mildly humorous, from a psychological standpoint, that is possibly one of the most horrifying things that I have ever heard
an accurate portrayal of character, this nonetheless caused me to reread the line and then consider going through my computer screen to hire a therapist for dean
all the previous remarks regarding his position as under his father's thrall make it even more phasing as one considers the psychological conditioning required to do something so considerably drastic due to the muscle, nerve, tissue, and trauma that the affected injury site may go through
it seems...
a slight irrational
but regardless
this is a clear demonstration of the Winchester loyalty and I commend the display of insight that you manage to give into the character's thoughts

Wow...this hit way too close to home for me. I was in Sam's exact position last year to a year and a half ago. Left my abusive mother to go to treatment inpatient, then refused to come back and live with her. I tried to make it, but my job wasn't making the bills, so I had to walk two miles a day to get to work and I was behind on rent. I lost a ton of weight...I eventually went back to my family and they helped me get started somewhere new and I'm doing much better now. This made me cry. I know I'm not the only one who's been through this, facing eviction cause I can't afford to live, but still...it has taught me to take advantage of every penny I make now