Oh my God this fanfiction is sooo amazing! And aside from slight grammar errors the only two problems that I had with this fic was the house elf washing Sirius' robes(its implied that the only living things in azkaban are the inmates and Dementors as no human, troll, giant, or house elf would ever set foot there unless 100% mandatory like Fudge's visit.) And the fact that Remus raped Sirius in chapter 6 was basically just brushed off with an apology followed by an immediate 'I forgive you.' in chapter 11. I don't think Sirius would necessarily forgive Remus as fast as he did in this fic, I mean it IS rape and rape is something that scars people for life. He would probably act more warry around Remus after that incident. But anyways other than that this was an amazing fic to read! I loved how you added the detale of the Dementor touching Sirius' head to change his memories! Actually to be fair I loved

I have to say that Sirius almost strangling Harry never sat right with me. I prefer this interpretation.

This story helps make sense of things I hadn't even thought to wonder about, like why Sirius doesn't make his move during Care of Magical Creatures lessons, or where he gets the knife from.

'she had ultimately with her parents on the matter.' I think you're missing the word 'sided' here. I know this is picky- but you make so few errors that I thought you might want to know about this one, as you obviously care about grammar and spelling.

Oh man, how different things would have been if he had gone to see Remus. Or, that being said, if he had voiced his suspicions of Peter to Remus so many years before.

It's a good thing Sirius knows his geography- if I'd been him I would have never made it!

This is so bittersweet. I'm glad Remus is sorry, and that it was more the wolf who was in control than him, but it's devastating how much this breaks him.

And now it seems like Sirius has done the same thing, as there was no consent from Remus. They keep on hurting each other

Wow. I never thought that Moony would go so far to prove his point, because there's no other word for that, that's rape. I get why he was so angry, but I still don't think anyone deserves that.

I thought that dementors couldn't see?

Ok. So you made Denis a rapist

Sorry for my bad English, so pleasers don't grammar-nazi me xD Also don't want to be the one that has to criticize everything, I really enjoy your writing style and so far ( cought by a nostalgic hunger for fanfictions on my all time favorite character and wolfstar slash ) I have read many of your fics...but just can't go over your description of Sirius's childhood, journey to Hogwarts, and sorting. We all know that he was in the same compartment on Hogwarts Express as James, Lily and Snape, and wouldn't mind breaking the family tradition and being sorted in another house rather than Slytherin. The thing that makes your fics so great, apart from your writing abilities, for me is you sticking so much to canon, and this just doesn't fit, and somehow ruins it for me...

...wait...so Remus actually DID rape him? Remus is literally a rapist in this story...? And we're supposed to just move past this fact, or find it somehow in any way justifiable because of Sirius' mistake, or not find it justifiable but still forgive him because Sirius did [which is extremely unhealthy and terrible], or at all continue to ship this even though there's actual rape involved? Er...Yikes. Wtf?

Aahh, I loved this story (: (was reading till the end, and that took till nearly 1:00 AM, haha)
But it kind of feeled like the end was rushed.

I really do love this. Honestly, I do. Can you PLEASE update your Conspiracy of Cartographer series? Please? Honestly, it is TORTURE without any updates on it. PLEASE!

I don't know why, but your stories always make me smile, cry, laugh, and really think about things. How sad and lonely it would be to be a werewolf at Hogwarts without Sirius and James and (as much as I hate the traitor) Peter. How awesome the friendship of the Marauders had to be for everything like that to happen. How just plain TRAGIC that story is. It's a story Rowling should write, really. Kind of like an origin story. How everything happened. I want to know sooo badly. I want to know how the Founders met. I want to know what Dumbledore was thinking when he fought Grindelwald. I want to know what made Tom Riddle the way he was. I want to know that awesome story of the Marauders. It's my life. I NEED TO KNOW! Your stories are the best way for me to get an idea of what happened.

Rowling how you torture us with our curiosity. I would like to sit down and have a few words with her. She needs to write it! SHE MUST! I probably seem insane now, but it's how I am, so... Whatever!

Bye! Ciao! Sayonara! Hasta la vista!

Very interesting story :-)