This is a very interesting story. I like how Sam did see the supernatural problem while he was supposed to be keeping a low profile. Dean was begining to see that Sam would leave him and John as very strange with Raven.

Really good!

I love the the start of this story. You were recced by Roque Clasique on LJ and I am glad she did. I like John here, gruff but the little things like a touch to Dean's head or helping him get more comfortable. Even the "Thanks" to Sam. It seems like Dad is a little pissed though, I am anxious to read the next chapter.

I cannot believe I had not read this before.

This is so beautifully written, so beautifully realized, heartbreaking and stomach-wrenching and disturbing and difficult. WOW. I see that this story is old - I can only hope you've continued writing since this. I'm going to go check now.

This was absolutely, positively BRILLIANT! So well written, so full of emotion and angst and, dare I say it...? Poetry.

God this was just beautiful. Every inch of it beautiful and kind of breathtaking. Definitely going on my list of favourites.

God what a fantastic ficlet, simply adored the characterisation of our men and the angst!

This was totally intriguing, from beginning to end. The dogs, Dean's injuries, the poltergeist. I love how you used repetition to convey a tone. I have the picture of Dean standing on the lawn in my head so clear.

I love your description of the heat, it's like another element.

I didn't totally understand the monster mystery,...but that could be because I'm just a little dense. ;) And even so, it was still interesting and creepy.

Nicely done. :)

This was fantastic and so, so haunting.

Great writing.

GN

I am so glad I found this! Wonderful story:-)

I just found this and read it all in one go. Really, really beautiful.

There was such a nice flow between the three Winchester men, each unique, each with his own voice and convictions, yet all these wonderful little overlaps that, of course, make perfect sense.

You have a terrific flow and voice to your prose. I very much enjoyed this.

Thanks for sharing.

what a great story! I love how you've portrayed each of the Winchester men. I think you have absolutely captured their personalities and thoughts. I almost didn't want this to end . It reads like a canon shortstory; like it could be an issue of the comic book or the show. Please keep on writing!

Good ending...I loved you continual use of repetition (really, throughout the whole story). Dean is such a complex character, one which I feel many people don't give credit to - but you were able to put so many layers into him, and we were able to see his whole persona. Sam, too, is complex - his dedication to his family always warring with his desire to be "normal." And John. Oh, he gave up so much for this hunt - will he always have those gaps in his memories, now?

Wonderful story! I LOVED it :) Keep up the great work!

Shinigami06

Really enjoyed the whole thing. Thanks for posting.

Monti that was magnificent. There were so many great lines in that story i can't even mention them all. You obviously saved the best for last. That chapter could almost be a story on it's own.

Everybody...give it up for Monti!

Sam Will alwats Choose Dean, Good Chapter