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Guest chapter 17 . 1/15/2013 Adding your story to my favorites |
friendlyneighborhoodlorelai chapter 17 . 3/3/2007 So, I saw this chapter was updated & *squee* but then it hit me that this was the last chapter & I actually put off reading it for a while. I'm so sad to see it go & I wanted to prolong it. However, it was such a beautiful ending it helped ease the pain of it being over. I love their beginning phone call, with Luke being a little dirty. It reminded me of 6.03 with his not bringing Lorelai pants and 'that might be intentional' comment. Definetly made me laugh. Their parallel getting ready moments were great-this is what I love about fan fiction, insight into their mind. And thank you for Rory-Luke interaction! Gosh I miss that. Their vows, so beautiful: "When we first got engaged in what seems like years ago, I imagined our wedding day just as any other bride would. I see a different picture, but this time without the uncertainties or insecurities." I love how you brought in the previous engagement & made it something beautiful. If anything is to be gained out of the 'journey' it should be security & certainty. "I may not say every thought in my head, but know that you are there more often than not." That line, wow. Great writing & channeling of Luke-saying so much with so little. Thanks for this great story, I'm so sad to see it end. Any fics in the works? |
Like2CUHappy chapter 17 . 3/2/2007 OMG i luv it! ur wedding was the best i have ever read and it all seemed so real..if only u were writing the plot of the show!LOL. Anyways, that was great and keep up the good work! |
JavaJunkie383 chapter 17 . 3/1/2007 I'm upset that you've ended it, but I absolutly love the way you did. You couldn't have done it any better. Perfect. I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
justawritier chapter 17 . 3/1/2007 awsome chapter. It was really the perfect ending. I really enjoyed the story. |
write-the-other-way chapter 17 . 3/1/2007 Wow... simply amazing... he best Luke and Lorelai wedding fic I have ever read. Great job. I love your story. MEGGAN |
uvasoccerchick93 chapter 17 . 3/1/2007 Aw that was so cute! i loved it! im sad its over now! :( i think you should do a sequel cuz this was really really really good! |
literatiwhore chapter 17 . 3/1/2007 really good ending. |
vaso.caskett chapter 17 . 3/1/2007 This was one of the best fics out there! |
friendlyneighborhoodlorelai chapter 16 . 2/19/2007 Has it really been this long since I reviewed? Sorry! Time is getting away from me! I love this story...the simple, elegant pace...it just flows and gives that lovely JJ feel! So I believe 13 was my last review. 14-For a Chris-centric chapter, I really enjoyed it. I like how you drew a conclusion to the two of them, with Lorelai so strong and firm. Although part of me is glad that CL ended so civilily (sp?) for Rory's sake, I wish it would have been more strong & firm like in your take. But then again, I love your take since we'd have LL together! 15-I still have this great hope that E/R will give LL that house! But for that to happen, LL would have to get engaged/married in the series, and I'm trying not to raise my expectations. So thanks for allowing me to see it in your story! Also, I love how you intercut old memories...it's such a nice touch & great insight into the character. I just adore LL and this conversation about kids. The classic Luke "You bet"...such a perfect ending. 16-I love the crazy town! How can we not have an LL wedding with SH involved? (Yea, my having no expectations is going amazing well, don't you this so? lol) I love watching Lorelai, Luke, Rory & April interact. In S, it was so apparent how they just flowed & were at ease with each other. I can see them having a moment like this, the four of them, in the series. That's one expectation I feel okay with keeping (optimism anyone? lol)...so it was great to read it. And coffee reminds him of her. Big 'aw' lol. Thanks for writing! |
uvasoccerchick93 chapter 16 . 2/17/2007 wow kirk is one funny guy! im glad he made an appearence in last wekks episode finaly! i really liked this chapter! Im glad Luke finished his vows . i was starting to get a little worried there! lol. update soon! |
JavaJunkie383 chapter 16 . 2/16/2007 "I love you, you big softy." - Always a perfect moment when placed right. Excellent job, as usual. I hope you're feeling better, I know how you're feeling. I had the flu a few weeks ago and it was most certainly not fun at all. Anyway...perfect story I can't wait until the wedding! |
Like2CUHappy chapter 16 . 2/16/2007 omg iluv it update asap, but if they're gonna go upstairs to, well, you know, um please don't make her pregnant or think she's pregnant. That's so over used. Just sayin but what ev, it's ur story Update asap! Thx |
justawritier chapter 16 . 2/15/2007 aw. so sweet. awsome chapter. I hope you're feeling better. pls update soon. |
uvasoccerchick93 chapter 15 . 2/6/2007 Hey! I loved this chappie!(i love that word!)lol. so im like really excitde about the eppie 2night!lol. ONce again i loved the chapter!it was great! no excellant! no fabulous! no it was grexcefab!thats a combination of all three. lol. update soon! |