| Reviews for Rachel's Good-bye |
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   Starlit Anabelle chapter 1 . 12/20/2001 That was so sad. I almost cried. Everybody, stop picking on Maria-Destiny. I liked it! |
| Merton Lynn chapter 1 . 7/8/2001 awww |
| M. C chapter 1 . 7/2/2001 Okay, but not heartwrenching enough to draw pity for Tobias and Rachel. I overestimated my expectations, would've expected a more lengthier and detailed fic. Major spelling errors; "dye" means to color; appropriately spelled "die" or "died" for someone dying or is dead. Rating: **. Rated G. |
| Black Jade chapter 1 . 6/30/2001 It's short and sweet, but it would have been better if not for the spelling and grammar mistakes. I mean, heloo? " Dyeing"? " Weeped"? I'm sorry, but all your mistakes spoilt the effect the fic was supposed to have. |
| MercedesofHPA chapter 1 . 6/28/2001 oh maria! This was so sooooo sweet and SO sad! But i loved it! i cried dureing this one too. |
| Lenalaye chapter 1 . 6/27/2001 Many short fics here. it's died not dyed so that you know. Yeah, Ellimist should have done that for Rachel. Narf! |
| Kayura1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2001 Doesn't it just suck that she died? Right at the very end, too. By the way, you did that perfectly. Beautifully. I thought you had the right to know. |
| LaMuchachaLoca chapter 1 . 6/24/2001 Great story...a bit of spelling errors (dyedie, etc)...but overall pretty good! _- |
| Saraneth chapter 1 . 6/24/2001 It was ok. Too many spelling errors though. |
