thats s a great one shot, I really like it :)

Hey. Love the story you have written. Makes everything sound so dramatic and exciting.

And you got me interested in the "Fear" story you said you were inspired by. But...I can't find it. Do you have a link? Thank you if you do.

that was brilliantly done.

I don't see this as slaughtering Deidara, but rather adding a new depth.

Besides if fits with his on what art is.

So how do feel about Tobi being Madara?

that was...very good

i must say, that even now when there is no doubt that tobi was not obito, that i'd have prefered this to cannon.

this deidara was an amazing character by the way, despite what you said...

*blinks* What do you mean Kisame is sane? As for Obito, Deidara should tell Kakashi and Tsuande EXACTLY what Sasori and Orochimaru did! So someone can put Tobi out of his misery. And put Obito's soul to rest...I'm certain Obito would prefer to be dead instead of being like this...

This story is great.

It's sad in a way too.

Poor Tobi/Obito! :*(

So AWESOme! -

It's okay. I think you did Deidara-kun justice! :P Very nicely done, and I like how you adapted Humpty Dumpty to Naruto-style! :P

Wow, I did like the Tobito theory before I read this, but this story really makes me think it is plausible. Nice wirting. And even though Deidara is not the way I image him to be, it was a nice story to read. :]

Wow, I love how you compare Tobi/Obito to Humpty Dumpty... That was a really clever connection! I loved your story, and believe me, you didn't slaughter Deidara. It sounded just like him actually, good job!

-Holly

I'm a bit on the fence about the whole Tobito thing, but this fic is really good in representing it.

Oh noes! Tobi is an omlet!

wow, this fic is really rather poetic... pretty good, still like deidara though!

C.C.C.

Interesting theory. Like how you descriped Deidaras thoughts on Obito/Tobi. What grabs is that this could be true.

:O I loved it! OMG, you made me a pro-Tobito-believer as well XD I don't think you *slaughtered* Deidara's character.. in fact, somehwere he even might be like that (bitter). In think you portrayed your idea brilliant! I loved it!

I like this a lot. I think this is exactly how Deidara would feel about Tobi if he really is Obito. The inclusion of the nursery rhyme was a very cool and unique touch.