Is that it? Seems there should be more of a conclusion?

Lassie ... Timmy ... ROFL

You are still going right? I mean, where's the part where they all reconcile, send the alien to a good home, say good bye to Jackie, kiss each other passionately, then head off to adventures gallore! :)

I quite enjoyed this. Everyone was realistic, and the OCs were believable characters.

Really enjoyed reading this. The only thing it's missing is an epilogue of the Doctor talking his head off to Rose, making up for lost time...

This was absolutly magnificent! I'm not quite sure if that was the end or not, but really, this story is brilliant! I really enjoyed reading it and I hope you continue to write Doctor Who fics. :)

Yay! I lives in Coventry :3 Great that it gets a mention xD

Awww, I didn't realize this was marked as in progress when I started reading it - and now I want to read the rest!
You've come up with a fantastic idea in this story, and I found it tremendously enjoyable and quite well written. I do hope that you will one day come back to it and write that final chapter. It would be nice to wrap it all up.
Either way, you did a great job! :)

One more chapter. That's all I wanted. :( Shame I'm a few years late... Oh, this would've been a terrific episode.

I love this story :) please don't tell me you're not going to continue? You're killing us here.

Fantastic!

Update sooooon.

Great story! Any plans on finishing it?

Yeah, it's one of those ethical dilemma adventures.

You should add another chapter or two to wrap it up. :)

This is so captivating - one of the better Doctor Who fics I've read on this site. I hope you consider continuing it someday!

Hi there,

Great story - dark, humorous, touching and action-packed make a great mix. I particularly loved the doctor's helplessness and the hosptial room covered in felt tip was a great image. I know this story hasnt been updated in a while but it would be great to see how it all pans out in the end.

Nienna