Great fic! Very well-written and I like the tube explanation.

LOVE the ending with Ros :D

LBx

How come I never came across this story before? This is absolutely brilliant!

Fantastic fic :D

That was so cute! I just loved it! You made my day. Thanks for posting.

Yay! Go Ros! :-)

HA! Loved the little bit about Ros at the end. Somehow I can SO picture her sitting on a darkened Grid watching the computer screen, lol. Keep writing!

xoxKassy

loved it! especially the ros bit at the end. are you going to continue?

Excellent. They're far too caught up in the are they aren't they question, to think about whether they're being conned!

And brilliant Ros introduction right at the end.

Loved it.

Aww... poor Jo!Loved it very sweet... if only

Oh that was fab Cath! Absolutely wonderful, really made me smile! Bless them...I knew you just HAD to have them going out with each other, and this was such a clever way of doing it! And of course, crafty Ros would know, wouldn't she!

This was cute. Love to see that Ros is clearly more superior and underhanded at surveillance than Jo & Zaf.

Would be interested in seeing this continue. :)

lol I love it

write more!

Oh now that was interesting. What are MI5 teaching their officers? It was great, I loved the cheeky element. Really enjoyable!

haha! love it...so spooksy! i dont think this should be the end though...it could make for a very entertaining full fic! its such a good idea that im jealous! x