Me gusto mucho tu fic fue muy tierno lastima que solo tuviera 2 capitulos.

Lol. That's the way to do it: "Life's short. Eat dessert first." - many have said this, but I remember it most from my great-grandmother Edna Cheney. Rest in piece, grandma. I'll never forget you.

Good story, if a little bit lacking in detail about somethings. But it worked out better that way. Story flow was good, although i'm assuming since the principal knew about them being Senshi, and you referred to the palace that this took place in Crystal Tokyo?

Either way, nice work!

Write from the heart! - Thorn on a Rose

-LF1080

I just read your fanfic and it was great! I really enjoyed the ending and it didn't suck. Thanx for the story!

im just happy i found this just now, if not..judging by the update date...i would be waiting for a long time :)

oh. so they have another child? adopted or...well nevermind

Yay, so cute. Yay for having an accepting principal. Great story.

"The ending sucks." is this story finished? Oo Well, if you ask me, i think it rocked as well as the 1st chapter... I can't believe that nashiko married a jerk like kouta, sigh... will you update soon if there's anymore? Please, update soon, i don't want to get old 2 years just to read another of your chapter, lol... Take care~

RukaMichi92

LMAO! A fanfic from 2006, and you decided to update this 2 years later... But i'm glad you did, i like this story and kiseki'c so cute... Now i'll have to go read the other chappie~

RukaMichi92

Could not be happier that you updated his story. I was wondering if you would ever finish it lol. Excellent job. I'm so happy that you're writing again. Woot! )

I think you should write a story telling what happens with the conference, or add another chapter to this to tell what happens at the conference. I feel a little cheated that you mentioned the meeting and then never showed the confrontation. Other then that I loved it :D

What a cute story despite the situation they're in. Please contine. )

:D i LOVE it

and even though i say this with every reveiw, this is truly your best one yet...

and your cutest :D

I absolutely love this Kiseki-stories. Ive got a daughter myself, shes thirteen years old, and weve had those kind of fights over the years. So I can imagine the anger and hate that Haruka and Michiru feel. Its so unfair when your child is treated that way, because theres nothing you can do to stop it. Such words always come from adults, never from a child. They hear it at home, and say it at school, never thinking about the consequences.

i love this story. this is a nice start. i love kiseki,she is so happy and funny. i am mad that someone would say something like that to does have a family just not the same way that the boy does..her daddy just happens to be a girl abd her mother is a girl, she considers haruka saddy caouse haruka fits the daddy role the best. i can't wait for more. you write haruka and michiru well. i think ki-chan is kind of a cross between the two.

this is starting out to be very good...only thing is i don't understand the relationship between haruka and that little boy's father...is he also a racer or does he just know them from the PTA or what?