Wonderful! I had thought that I would never be able to forgive Darcy for kidnapping Lizzy, but he was so agonized over it. I finally forgave him!

uh huh! what now?

Me too

What?!

An interesting twist that led to adventure

whaat

I have read both versions of this story and while this one was better, it still doesn't give any consequences for the Lady C and Caro and all the trouble they caused. Too many stories have a rush to the end and it usually leaves the villains (male or female), getting off without any accounting for what they have done. I was hoping this one had some kind of closure rather than a "They live happily ever after." Still seems incomplete

I liked the story but the ending needs some work. It's too rushed. Thanks for sharing your vision with us.

Well that's interesting and totally non canon! Love it!

I think I remember the first writing of this story. And if I do remember it correctly...this version is MUCH better. Thank you for sharing this story.
It would be nice to see what happens to the two dragon's in this story. Auntie and Caro. That blasted Lydia...I did like how Elizabeth handled her at the elopement attempt. Just throw the trash in the carriage and send her on her way! She WILL learn some manners with Mrs Romney.
Great story. I do hope you continue writing.

awwww...very sweet

And enter the Dragon...

I caught a mistake. "Darcy quitted Mr Darcy's office". Of course you meant Mr Bennet's office. I am sure that I am not the only person to catch that. LOL
Darcy really has a hole to dig himself out of. Here's the shovel! Get to it!
Great writing.

so sad!

Loved this!