Reviews for Unpredictable, Unexpected and Unlikely
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 6 . 4/17/2019
You write Luna PERFECTLY! PLEASE write more Blaise and Luna fics; I can only reread this one so many times ;P
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 2 . 4/17/2019
What an absolute delight to read! Your writing is lovely! And such witty banter! Good work!
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 1 . 4/17/2019
SO ADORABLE! I love how you wrote them together :D
KieraRaelyn chapter 7 . 1/17/2017
Damn it all. I finally - finally! - find a good, long Blaise/Luna fic on this site, a near impossible feat let me assure you, and it is, of course, not finished. Not only that, but it will probably never be finished. In fact, you, dear author, will probably not even see this review. My god, this is depressing as hell.

In case you do happen to see this, I will briefly expound on my feelings for this fic.
1) I love your Blaise and the insight we get into him. He's not quite my ideal Blaise, but he's quite lovable anyway.
2) I like your Luna, in general, as well. The only thing I don't like, and it's something I've noticed is pretty common for some reason in fics that focus on Blaise and Luna as the main couple, is her insecurity about herself, her assertion that she's not smart or interesting. Maybe it's just me, but I don't feel like that's... Luna. It takes a special kind of confidence and resilience to persist in the kinds of beliefs that she has and clothing she wears in spite of the ridicule and derision she faces on a daily basis. I could see her being cognizant of the fact that she is not typically beautiful and perplexed by someone finding her to be, but not the others. Mud my opinion, though.
3) I love that Draco and Ginny are together. They are my OTP and it was through them that I discovered Blaise and Luna. I feel like you got their characters down pretty well. They don't seem to be OoC anyway.
4) I wish we could've seen Blaises's mother's reaction to Luna, either after that initial meeting or sometime after. You focused on that meeting a bit, and made sure to note how Xenophilius felt about Blaise, so it would have been nice to get Blaises's mum's reaction.

In general, I loved your fic and wish that you had finished it. This ship seems sadly underrepresented. I only just started to look for stories that focused primarily on them within the past two days and have already read almost all the ones that seem worth my time on this site. There are sadly very few above 10k words and I prefer novella or novel length fics, which is why I was excited about yours before I even started to read it. I hope, though not optimistically, that one day you will come back and finish this story. This ship needs it.
sunset oasis chapter 7 . 10/18/2016
I do love the Draco & Blaise friendship :)
sunset oasis chapter 5 . 10/18/2016
I love them so much! And I love Blaise rolling his eyes at himself at being a born compromiser, oh god this man is pure gold. And I love he lets her wear the necklace because he doesn't want to change her into someone she isn't.
sunset oasis chapter 4 . 10/18/2016
Blaise is really adorable like this!
sunset oasis chapter 3 . 10/18/2016
Blaise making love to Luna is so endearing and sweet, and I love how gentle he is! And I love how Luna doesn't care for his past and understand him so well, even if he never said some stuff.
sunset oasis chapter 2 . 10/18/2016
Oh god Blaise and Luna are super adorable! And I quite like the banter between D&B too.
"Malfoy, I never judge. I mock." - this line is so golden and I just love it, this is SUPER in character of Blaise.
And I love the 'it deserved a raised eyebrow' line too. Love it.

I love Ginny marching over to kiss Draco, and Blaise defending Draco against Ron, Blaise and Luna kissing ... love everything.
sunset oasis chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
I love how Blaise cares about Luna, and I enjoyed the side Draco/Ginny as well!
Char chapter 2 . 3/18/2016
Could actually be better, if only you didn't write other couple as often as the main couple..
ever-lethargic chapter 7 . 12/20/2015
Super cuteness plus hilarious situations equals pure perfection!
schleifchen chapter 7 . 3/15/2015
I really love this story! And I really like the relationship between Draco and Ginny as much as the relationship between Blaise and Luna! I hope you will update this story some day. Otherwise it would be a waste, because this story is so beautifull!
Sorry for my really bad english...
Epoch95 chapter 7 . 10/23/2014
Omg please update! I need to know what happens next.
marthapreston4 chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
I so wonder what Charlie was doing that so traumatizing
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