This was a good fic

PLZ DON'T ABANDON THIS FIC!

Aww such a shame

I really like this story, I ready every last word.(; This was my favorite thing to read for awhile, tell me, when will you be publishing a book and becoming famous? Hohoho Anyways. I can't leave a review for everything, sp I will do the first chapter! Because you have yet to finish, which I pray you would consider...because I love this!

G.o.y.

I know you discontinued the story,but i felt that i should still leave a review.I enjoyed reading this story and even though the chapters just seemed to be fillers i still loved it and hope maybe one day you'll reconsider and keep this story going.

wae?please don't give upon this story..i'll kept waiting

WTFB-not really just mad- u have to make more th was sooo good n funny plus I want 2 no w sasuke is going 2 do n w s naruto goig 2 say or do. Plus the cats were a good idae.

Why oh why so manny of you people feel the need to write that the word "teme" means "a bastard", while it doesn't! Which dictionary says it does? ! ? !

Never mind. I REALLY like this story! Reading this is kind of like watching a funny cartoon.

more:)

you give itachi an uke too~~

Actually I'm sure that most of the readers here have noticed your mistakes, I've noticed them too, just taken them for granted because you have a great plot. You see, writing a fic isn't just all about being perfect in grammar and all those stuff. It's also about making it interesting by creating an unusual plot. Because of that unusual plot you would attract more readers and those readers would not acknowledge your mistakes because your great plot overpowers those simple and understandable grammatically incorrect lines. But as a sign of respect and concern, as a reader I should told have told you about your wrong points. For that, I apologize. But since you have noticed your mistakes after all, making you aware of it wouldn't be needed. Your story is really good though, I wish that you would change your mind and continue it so you wouldn't be crashing hopes of those who counted on you. :)

I HATE YOU YOU MONSTER HOW COULD YOU? I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY I PRAY HOPING THAT YOU WILL UPDATE ARGHHHHHHHH FUCK YOU! I HATE YOU... DAMN YOU TO HELL (PANT PANT)

Why how could you? this is one of the best stories I ever read and now you just trow it away? I really really wanted Sasuke and Naruto to have sex! but now...ughh I just want Sasunaru lemon!

I hate you

Well, that's too bad your not continuing the fic. I've silently watched this for years :p Didn't realize it's been 2 years until you wrote that.

As the writer I can't beg you to continue so I guess it was a pleasure reading your work.

Yes, you made errors but it's not like us readers would bug you about it when it's your imagination we're reading. Shit happens.

Anyways, loved it byes.

Aw, well, I never found it horrible.

I wish you the best of luck though!

-AMLF

even if your wording is bad,your plot and ideas are really i guess if you dont want to continue it,then it's all up to you.

I knew it! No wonder! Because you also like kyo kara maoh! I swear when I read this fic, it definitely reminds me of it and only now that I looked at your pen name it did made sense. Awesome fic, really! You should update this! It's so gooood!