Reviews for Commoner's Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hi very nice chapter I nearly fell of my chair and you catched tamakis personality very good. maybe next time they should be in a restaurant or in a public open-air bath would be cool. NO MY DAUGHTER CANT EXPOSE HERSELF LIKE THATlol |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny story, good work |
![]() ![]() That was so funny! I really want to read more on Tamaki's commoner experiences. |
![]() ![]() lol that was so funny! |
![]() ![]() I love this chapter! u should write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ow that was hillarious! I loved it! definetelly I want more... please *-* (come one... 7 more reviews! ppl) it was nice hoe tamaki and haruhi are now dating... it didn't seem OOC to me :P And only one mistake (I guess) at the first line... you wrote "Tamaki and Haruhi were out for they're two month anniversary" ... and should have been "Tamaki and Haruhi were out for their two month anniversary" (their, not they're)... well that's all... keep up with the good work ;) |
![]() ![]() ooh... i love this story.. update soon! i'd love to read more about tamaki's commoner experience tales (with haruhi!). |
![]() ![]() Ah, that Tamaki is a baka! - Good job! And i hope you will write another chapter! -Kinoria |