it's a good chapter;D

the best bit was when they realised the machine didn't like them! made me laugh!

In next chapter, do a scene where heather gets flung from a high height and hits the ground hard and she goes into a coma but the others think she is dead.

Over the Hedge: Vincent's Return Chapter 12: Rescuing heather

Upload more of the story by today buddy

Please upload the rest of the story by tomorrow please?

Please upload more of the story by tomorrow

No cool bro, I want more to read. But on the other hand I love you story I want to now what happened

How and why did your cousin infect your own computer?

please continue.

YAY! *Glomps* YOU'LL (possibly XD) UPDATE! I LUFS YOU! XDDD

Wow, I forgot I even HAD this story on my favorites! XD

Thanks, man!

Word of advice from a fellow writer: You're writing is only as good as your confidence level. Don't let the brick wall stop you, cuz there are many ways to victory.

You've got people on this site that still have faith in you, my friend. That's gotta help a little.

Peace,

krp101

Alright. here's an idea for the last few chapters. they group manages to get 2 of the wagonloads, but only has one night left. RJ, knowing this, decides to take the two wagonloads with him to the cave, and offer them and himself in exchange for Heather. The idea scares Ozzie half to death, and as RJ walks off to make the deal, he secretly comes up with a plan to disguise the last wagonload with styrofoam, while underneath there will be maybe 40-50 pounds of fireworks. I think you can finish the story from there. Just an idea, but it could work. Hope to see the conclusion soon!

you have too continue it this story is amazing

This story is awesome man, hurry and make more chapters! Also at the part where Ozzie punches RJ, you should have instead have both get into a massive fight. That would be awesome.