I wish there was more to the ending than that but this was an amazing story and very well thought up. Very creative. Awesome. My favorite by far.

The story made Vic quite surprised; Vic never imagined the meeky wimpy Yuu-chan would do violence like that.
Still, Vic loved this story. :)

HAve you ever posted teh Yaoi verion on another site? If so could you sned the address to me since I would like to read it.

Thanks

This story was cool! i really liked it...

update it soon

one of my favorite k.k.m. fanfics!

can u pleeaassee write a sequel? pretti please!

I like the concept and I look forward to reading more of your story.

Strangely, I can't find your story under the name junkojunkon as you put in this latest chapter.

When I typed in your username: junkojunko, I find the story but I cannot find the latest chapter or the yaoi version as you call it

I can't follow or find your info _ And I really want to finish reading this ;_;

is the best.. please reply where are you going to post you're new fic.. this fic is soo col _ i love it

You know you could just change the rating and upload here... or you can sign up in and post it there under the fanfiction section (after the bloody maintenance is over ...)

Good story, BTW. I'm really looking forward to reading the end of it.

Hi!

I thought the story was really good. Please where are the last chapters? But I have a few things to say:

(im such a critic -_-')

1. The story could have been longer. You could paint a big picture of the pain he's going through by having it last for days or weeks.(Its dumb, but fangirls like me love to have the main in TONS of pain)

Read "The Mindsifter" here on to get a good idea.

2. The characters are a little out of character(lol doesnt make much sense)

3. You could have written out the scenery. Its hard to tell where Yuri's at.

4. With Yuri having his emotions go wild, you could add that the Maoh appears too.

What alotta people do is that they rewrite their story later after posting it. Then if you add these notes the fic could be twice as good. :) Thank you for your creativity!

that's the end? well...it's nice...thanks for this great work:)

hey the story is creepy in a good way and it will be good without the yaoi in it too so dont leave us out here at ffn.

Hey there I'm sure someone has already told you about them but here you go. w dot mediaminer dot org and adult fanfiction dot net are good places to post more racy chapters.

Ja!

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