| Reviews for Visions of Betrayal |
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SopranoWithAnIdentityCrisis chapter 29 . 7/11/2019 Good morning Nili! May I just say that you are an amazingly talented person? My sister and I were introduced to you by our friend (read: unofficial sister) and suffice it to say that you tend to alternately amaze, amuse, and horrify us. Also, we all have developed a tendency to have arguments in character (my sister being Elrohir, my friend Legolas, and myself Estel), and I constantly refer to my friend as a reckless elf because SHE seems to have a tendency to get hurt (though thankfully that tendency has not extended to being kidnapped by evil maniacs) and she worries about my incompetent human immune system because I keep getting sick and she never does, and my sister constantly insists that she is right because she is over two thousand years older than me (though in reality she's two and a half years younger). Also, from the looks of things you have abandoned this story, despite your assurances to the contrary. I hope that this is because you have been on several archeological missions with no access to a computer or the Internet, and I also hope this is NOT because you have gotten into a mess worthy of your (extremely evil) alter ego. In any case, you left us on a HIGHLY suspenseful cliffy and I am not very happy about it. If there is another chapter someday, be assured that that will be a very good day for me. And for all your other readers as well. |
Seleia chapter 29 . 9/26/2018 It's been 7 years since an update. iI realise that's an extremely long time in the world of fanfiction. If somehow you get to read this, just wanted to let you know I've been your follower since I was in middle school, it's been over 10 years since I first read your stories. I still read them from time to time because they are some of the best I've ever read! Hope you are living well and please know you still have fans who read your work even after all these years. |
ArcAngel-liberty4all chapter 29 . 2/26/2018 I realise it's been a really long time since you updated but I loved your stories when I first read them and I have returned to them again and again so if you have another chapter of this somewhere on your hard drive and could update this that would be amazing x |
Lostariella chapter 29 . 12/25/2017 Nili it has been 7 years since you last updated. I know the chances of you ever returning to this fanfiction are slim, but I fell in love with every single one of your stories, and at the moment it is my life goal to see this one finished. I need to see if Aragorn is okay! I hope you are in good health, and I also hope that one day you remember this fanfiction! |
MistressOfImladris chapter 29 . 7/1/2017 I really hope you continue this - I am dying to find out more about Elrohir's plan! This whole story is amazing, though! :) |
Beria1021 chapter 29 . 4/7/2017 Where are the rest of the chapters?! I know you won't see this, but this is your best story yet! Did you die? Oh, well. I guess I'll just sit here, wondering what would've happened... till the end of my days. Nili! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! |
Reader chapter 29 . 8/12/2016 I have read all Your stories. I love them! It was great plesure for me and I truly cherish time spend reading. I think your stories are the best ones on this site and you did really good work, because you captured the Middle-Earth's beauty. I'd like to wish you luck and see more of Your work. You probably never see my review but who know? Meybe one day you will return to fan-fiction and add more and more chapters to your story, You really should.. the plod, your knowledge about history of Middle Earth... It's just awesome! I'm looking forward that day and the update. I hope it come true,. By the way, there is always Hope! |
Ghost chapter 29 . 4/23/2016 Just update already! |
CelestialWarrior chapter 29 . 1/14/2016 Nili, I know its been years, and you are probably in some remote region of Africa now, sifting through the sand for tiny shards of pottery and such, but you really need to finish this story! Please! I've read all of your stories and loved them so much, and you can't move on in the world without at least finishing this one story! I'm sure, even with your evil plot bunny, it would only take you a few more chapters to finish. Ok, well, like maybe 5...or 10...but no more than 12 at the most! Probably. Anyway, please! You promised you would never abandon a story! Pleasepleasepleaseplease! |
CelestialWarrior chapter 1 . 1/14/2016 Nili, I know its been years, and you are probably in some remote region of Africa now, sifting through the sand for tiny shards of pottery and such, but you really need to finish this story! Please! I've read all of your stories and loved them so much, and you can't move on in the world without at least finishing this one story! I'm sure, even with your evil plot bunny, it would only take you a few more chapters to finish. Ok, well, like maybe 5...or 10...but no more than 12 at the most! Probably. Anyway, please! You promised you would never abandon a story! Pleasepleaseplease! |
anelawilliams chapter 29 . 12/8/2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO where is the rest. I really love this story and all the feels that are coming right. I am crying. |
catherine10 chapter 29 . 10/4/2015 hey nili i want you to know i am your newest fan i started to read your stories four years after you last updated and i have to tell you that i fell in love with every single one of them so finish this story! or else i will send a group of orcs after you to do to you ALL the evil things you have to done to your characters in ALL of your stories! |
Elf141 chapter 25 . 8/22/2015 You got your stars back ️️ Yay the dots were sooo distorting |
darth picard chapter 29 . 4/20/2015 This dtory is AMAZING! You should definetly writemore. Im dying to read more! |
Estel-Undomiel25 chapter 29 . 3/29/2015 Okay, I neglected my homework all day to read this story even though I knew it hasn't been updated in four years because it is so awesome! You've built convincing characters in Tolkien's world, or given great personality and backstory to the existing characters. And you are frighteningly good at angst and cliffhangers. I am grateful that at least Halbarad and Aragorn were rescued by the time the story reached this chapter, cuz for the last several I was just chanting PLEASE GET THERE IN TIME PLEASE to myself over and over again. Also, great banter and dialogue and good job at keeping the mystery of who's behind this and who's a traitor going for so long. Ahhhhh this is crazy-anyway, I hope you check back in with this story soon! Please? |