*happy sigh* Such a wonderfully incompetent police force. Luv it. *has a thought* Ok, last doughnut in the shop/box/whatever - Homer and Chief Wiggum step through the door! FIGHT FOR THE DOUGHNUT! *laughs at own joke* You know, I really shouldn't do that. But anyway, this was funny!

And so the cycle continues ... *points to escaping Snake*

Ok, hyper ranting done now. *zip*

Haha! That had me in stitches! It's like a normal routine...you'd have thought Bart would have learned by now though...HAHA! See! Now I have ME in stitches...hahahahahaha! Loved it!

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Nice story, I like how you made Snake's robbery like he was just going through his daily routine (which is sort of true) good work.

Your story could use more of Snake's well-known manner of speech: "I am, like, totally gonna rob you, dude! Bwa-ha!"

This was the funniest thing ever! I laughed so much, especially with Wiggum and the doughnuts and the fast food! And the scramble with Bart was hilarious! Ah, you gotta love Lou. This was really great! Do you think you'll be doing this with more Springfieldians?

So...that's how Snake's days go!

This made me chuckle a few times. I ecspecially enjoyed the comic relief with Chief Wiggum. You know, if they hired a new chief, this wouldn't happen...

Write more! You're good at it!

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