| Reviews for A Simple Change: The Sharingan Volume 1: Rebirth |
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Ferocious Nightfury chapter 2 . 11/5/2019 This chapter was just full of 'stupid'. Sigh... utter moron. And it's called decapitating carving knife not some weird kitchen knife. |
JerHat chapter 3 . 10/20/2019 Weeb. |
Sien chapter 8 . 7/21/2019 Naruto: you're name is zangetsu. ... Argggggggggggggg okay so I honestly need to stop walking in on fanfics that leed to this, cause I'm about to go ballistic. Also it's not because I don't like bleach it because bleach mixed into other anime fighting cartoons gets so outa wack, Soo if you'll excuse me I'm going to have to use more brain power then what I have to |
Count of Nossex chapter 6 . 5/11/2018 who the is arashi kazam? |
Count of Nossex chapter 3 . 5/10/2018 Stop butchering the Japanese ! With a dull knife I might add. |
Easal chapter 3 . 10/23/2017 I would really like to read these stories, but the Japanese phrases that you absolutely have to incorporate (sentences without translation) destroy the flow of reading and reading pleasure. Some words like Mendokuse or Baka or the suffixes -chan, -san and -kun are all right. But if I want to read or can read a story with Japanese sentences, then I read the complete in Japanese and not |
Isafish chapter 2 . 7/9/2017 Lol. This should've been a crossover with Naruto and RK. Still good tho. Very, very good. |
The Tetract chapter 5 . 11/18/2016 Clearing up what I said before, I meant Japanese in general conversation while the fox is mostly English. For some reason, it's different with moves. |
The Tetract chapter 3 . 11/18/2016 To be honest, it's pretty damn annoying how you randomly throw Japanese bits into the story. (Talking about the ones that aren't moves. E.G. "Aishiteru") Its offputting and unnecessary. Otherwise, I like the story so far. |
ShiniMecha chapter 5 . 8/12/2016 wow im liking this thing you've got going, but i think naruto and hinata are op with their avatars while sasuke has nothing that strong (im only on the 5th chapter X dont judge me?) |
AaronSec chapter 1 . 6/7/2016 They shouldn't know it is Kakashi that is the ANBU. Their identities are hidden by the code names. Dog is Kakashi if he's ever in uniform. |
Paxloria chapter 7 . 3/5/2016 Awesome chapter! |
Paxloria chapter 6 . 3/5/2016 Great chapter! Huh, didn't see that coming: Ruroni Kenchin teaches Naruto Spells from BLEACH. |
Paxloria chapter 2 . 3/3/2016 Bringing in Kenshin Himora before he became peaceful was an interesting idea. On the other hand, if Naruto was ever going to learn how to use a sword, he's a good choice to bring in to teach him. A bit strange to give the boy THAT sword on the first day though... |
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 5 . 12/20/2015 Why didn't Naruto get his Mangekyo Sharingan when he saw Hinata die? And inspite of the Kyuubi's chakra, Naruto has been in plenty life-threatening situations that could have given him a Sharingan. Why did Kyuubi not look into Naruto's memories when he started acting odd? Its not like he had a lot of things to do... |