This fanfic is definitely on the cliche side of things. The love potion thing is hardly new in the fanfic circuit. There was also too much summarizing/telling about things rather than actually showing it. Like, instead of writing "before he knew it, Link was occupying his every thought," you could have had a scene fleshing out at least one moment where Sheik started feeling like that.

why is Sheik a man? why gender bend her to be a man? what is the purpose i dont understand. do you really like imagining a man fucking another man?

Love the story

That was amazing. XD These feels are off the charts right now. I can't even... Oh my gosh. There's a grin stuck to my face.

Very well written. I really enjoyed this piece.

Oh my goodness I loved it! I am so going to be looking at your other work. But oh man if you writte another story about Link chasing Sheik then having his way with him, (Just like this one but diffrent) I think I would die from joy!

I think I squealed and blushes at this fanfic more so than any other SheikxLink fanfic I've read so far. Granted, I haven't read too many yet, but I'd still say that's an accomplishment. :) Thanks for the satisfactory story. :3

A sequel or Link's POV? Can I vote for both?

This is one of my all time favorite fics. and shall be listed in my "fanfiction notebook" as such... (Yes, I do have one of those, thank you very much.) This one-shot even beats most of the longer fanfics I've read.

I especially liked that you didn't skimp on the details or skip to new scenes. Also, I'm happy that you included the parts where Sheik was thinking about when Link first made him smile and laugh, rather than just say that "Link had made him smile one day" and move on with the fic.

One thing I'd like to point out, however, is that you put an A/N (1) after the word "blink" without going back and telling us what you meant in your final Author's note.

Thank you oh so much for writing this. It was long, it was lovely, and it was fabulous.

Ta!~

A sequel or Link's POV? Can I vote for both?

This is one of my all time favorite fics. and shall be listed in my "fanfiction notebook" as such... (Yes, I do have one of those, thank you very much.) This one-shot even beats most of the longer fanfics I've read.

I especially liked that you didn't skimp on the details or skip to new scenes. Also, I'm happy that you included the parts where Sheik was thinking about when Link first made him smile and laugh, rather than just say that "Link had made him smile one day" and move on with the fic.

One thing I'd like to point out, however, is that you put an A/N (1) after the word "blink" without going back and telling us what you meant in your final Author's note.

Thank you oh so much for writing this. It was long, it was lovely, and it was fabulous.

Ta!~

they are just ever so shy to admit anything, isn't courage what they...will at least link, have?

these two are just always making the others feeling having to have to gave a push so often, but you know, first step always hard

anyways, such a long one shot!

and a very nicely done one!

though is kind of confusing from time to time where POV change or time shift, but yeah it wasn't that hard to grasp

Very well written. Flamers go up in Flames!

Oh, God, win, win, Winny McWinnerson! :D This fic is so full of WIN! You are a WINNER!

I was laughing so hard (whether or not I was meant to) at Link's pursuit of Sheik. That must've been some STRONG aphrodisiac in his drink, man. XD And the Cuckoo thing was so hilarious I couldn't help but collapse into giggles after reading it. I'm serious. Your writing was awesome!

All in all, VERY well written, humourous with a bit of fluff and romance in there, and its all very well tied together. So lovely! And the morning after? Beautiful. Tugged at my heartstrings. A wonderful fanfiction, instant fav, and good fuel for my Shink fire. W00t! :D

Unfunfunf.

Beautiful. :)

Still random grammer issues here and there but I've read so many fictions that it didn't phase me.

All and all it was a very well put together story and it had all the emotion (and sex) that a fan fiction rightly deserves.

Thank you for the read.

Absolutely love it! Sneaky Sneaky Zelda. _

this is good. write more please