Ohhhhhh yesssss homie this never gets old!

I LOVE IT, I LOVE HARU/KYO "UKE KYO POWER"

Yay! XD They're to get married! XD Best day ever! Thanks for writing this!

Soooo good i just wish u expanded more on yuki and momiji

Si great

Santa Baby. Obviously.

"Sure, Shigure, whatever you say!" He snapped. "I got ass-raped by two large inmates named Bubba and Steve!"

lol:)

YAY!

Finally! They're getting married *squee* Thats awesome! Loved this story, i hadn't really though about the YukiXMomiji pairing but now that i saw it i really like it.

Things that I liked

Excellent characterisations

Aww poor Yuki is half asleep

*tries to imagine Haru in that* scary *shivers*

Cute interactions - I love the proposal

Ways to improve:

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Totally adorable!

~Myst

Things I liked:

Aww, poor Haru he's so shy

I like the interaction between Yuki and Haru

It's cute how they're worried about the other but it shows lack of trust

Nice way to end the chapter

Ways to improve:

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~Myst

Things I liked:

Cute interactions

I have a question: What's nookie?

Lol, Haru-kun's not that much of a pervert

Ways to improve:

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~Myst

Things I liked:

Aww, he's taking a cat nap

Haru really is too considerate -

Aww this scene is totally adorable!

So cute! *squee*

~Myst

Things that I didn't like:

should be lay instead of layed

Things I liked:

Nice interactions and lol, Aya must have gained weight XD

I feel so bad for Kyo right now - I'd want to kill him as well

Ways to improve:

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Nice work

~Myst

Things I liked:

Wow Shigure really does seem pissed XD

Poor Kyo but I agree burning Aya's hair is a crime!

Nice work

~Myst