Itachi as a general... Yummy! Isnt he the kind of lover we all dream of? A cute little story and I kind dig the fact that all the blonde girls were the goddesses! ahaha

Naruto doesn't mean swirl. Uzumaki means swirl. Naruto is a certain fishcake ingredient for ramen. Jiraya came up with it for the character in his story when eating ramen. And the Naruto was named after that character.

Such a cute story!

Interesting, very interesting.

sooooooooo...great

The whole "Kabuto RAPED Naruto" thing got overlooked WAY too easily, but other than that, the story was pretty good.

Hmmm... I am some what pissed but i guess happy for the most part!

GREAT! a bit OOC but yeah it was a great read o. SEQUEL ahahha that was actually half the reason why I reviewed...to ask for a sequel *puppy eyes* pleeasee?

A few grammar mistakes but an absolutely wonderfully written story. I wasn't too happy when Naru-chan got raped *pouts* but sh1t happens in life, so what you gunna do about it. Plus I think it added to the story.

P.S lmao at the bit about laying eggs at the bottom. I still got tears running down my face. TwT

Mostly, i like tis story..

But the ending a bit weird for me, kabuto supposely sufer..

Not happy after what he had done to naru..

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nice story loved it a lot...is there a sequel to this like a one shot or two :)

love it super story X3

i cant believe that it was your first lemon in this story it was awesome

great work with the fic

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Too lazy to log in. Hey you said tht this was your first time writing a lemon didn't seem so to me. AWESOME STORY! keep up the good work

Aw... I wanted a kabu/haku lemon!

I LOVE IT! real good! _