Wow wonderful story. Got me so hooked up. The author has a unique humor

I like this story and I’m gonna read it but I cant help but think of some stuff coinciding with this story.

Itachi is too OOC..(unless that was your intention.) In this fic, Itachi curses and gets angry at Hinata every 2 seconds. (At least so far...) and Sasuke seems more like the mature one in this.

In the anime/manga he is interpreted as a patient respectable man and you kind of downgraded him..

Sorry this is all subjective. So many people like your story and I will still be reading it. I hope I don’t offend anyone.

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Cute!

so here's my 2cents - the fic is hilarious but i can't help but be annoyed at hinata - i was having a hard time liking hinata in this fic. i did feel bad regarding sasuke. but she had to choose someone. and itachi was really mean.

Really like the story but it really made hinata seem like a slut and a bitch to sasuke. I know she didn't love him like itachi but it was wrong of her to give him self hope. It made me feel really sorry for sasuke to be out did by his brother yet again. Like yet can't sasuke get the girl or a girl really right for him( not Sakura). Anyway I did like the story it just made me sad.

Gaara: I like blood

Me: Gaara, you're not in this fic

Gaara: So, go read Mercy and leave review, or I'll kill you

Me: Are you promoting the story just now?

Gaara: ...

Where's Sasuke?

Poor Sasuke, I'll give you a lot of tomatoes

Although I'm sad for Sasuke, I can't get the smile out of my face

I love Naruto's bluntness

I don't know what to review, so I would just say, better be honest toward others even if it means you would hurt their feelings

Damn it, I just want a kiss, but Itachi had to ruin it.

I learnt something today. Don't open the door without looking behind it, unless you are ninja or someone skilled?

*pouting* I'm not satisfied. You shouldn't let Hinata get away. They should continue their business