. Good stuff. that ending confused me crazy amounts though.. Good job and keep up the good work.

Aw, so eerie and sad! You know, a lot of people can't write older Katara, but you seem to do wonderfully!

Aww, sad, very good though!

That was...wonderful.

Very saddening..butstrangely, it has a certain depth to it that I like. I remember reading th first chapter..but I'm not sure about reviewing? Hm..but for some reason, the last line really struck me. WOW. If you continue this..I think I'd like marry you. XD

that was really good i feel a bit sad and emo but it was good :) (crying)

So touching, but sad. I loved it though. Very well written.

So beautiful and so sad.

KD

That was SO sad, but so beautifully written!

'he couldn't save himself.' I like that part. ...This one's so sad. :'( ...Just what I like to read. I like it a lot. :)

Lon

That's so sad! I don't know why, but that last line made me want to cry so much!

I loved it. You are truly an awesome writer if you can get that much of a stir out of your audience.

Only thing, I think you could use a little more description in certain parts.

Aw.. that was sad, but good! write more!

OHH! Poor Aang! This was sad... but it also made me curious... who did those kids belong to?

So sad...and angsty...and traumatic...this is the first story i have read where Aang is actually afraid of dying.. In many others he just knows it might be his destiny.. Sad stories are good and poetic, though i use to prefer stories that are sad and then becomes happy when the one who died revives(in some unnatural way.. -_-)but a sad story is way more realistic... Oh no here it comes! *coughcough* THIS IS THE MOST SAD AND AWESOME STORY I HAVE EVER READ! XO ! *coughcough* sorry, could'nt help myself...

Oh...oh my god...wow.

Wow.

That seriously just about broke my heart right there.

Almost made me cry. And I don't cry.

(okay. This is being written serveral minutes later, once I've gotten over the fantasticness of the story.)

I do have a critique-there's not need for the flashback disclaimers.

Oh my word, so sad. I really really really hope Aang's battle with the Fire Lord ends this way ao TV