Heh, Leon's led quite the existence ;)

I only have one problem with this story, and it's a pretty general problem that I have with a lot of these types of stories: I really don't think Leon would quit the police force just because he turned into a demon/animal-spirit/godlike-creature. He just shows too much devotion to his job to just drop it because of a minor species change. Other than that, I loved this story! I thought you wrote D really well, and I could actually see him doing the things you described in this story! Please keep up the excellent work, and I hope you write more for this fandom!

great story. love it very funny an cute.

this was fun and interesting. and you didn't make leon's backstory too long either. short and sweet. lovely _

lol

Just finished reading your story (instead of studying for a midterm _). I loved it, so felt that I must comment on it. In term of your plot, it was a bit obvious that you were going to make Leon into an animal. However, your writing style is really good, so the story wasn't boring. I love stories that turn Leon into an animal of some sort but there are so few that are well written.

I hope that you write a sequel but if you don't this is a nice ending.

Thank you for sharing your work,

~MGA

i liked that alot!It was really interesting, and i'm glad theres not much of a spoiler, if any, 'cause i haven't finished the series!

sounds interesting, i'm glad it's finished so that i'm not left with any cliff hangers!

This was a fun story to read. I would be interested in reading a sequel if you write one.

Aw. :D What a nice ending!

Lilz

I hope you will write a next!

aw. now that was sweet. _\\

Hm, all things considered, I worry most about Chris. After all, he is *supposed* to be staying with his brother, and now that his brother's staying with the count? And what about his other family? Not that I'd like him to go away, mind you (I love him staying with the Count... being raised by him... so many possibilities), but still, facts are facts.

It 'twas a good story, and if you ever make a sequel, please tell me and I'll be on it faster then a weight-watcher on a pizza!

Nice fic!

I love it ñ.ñ

Kisses from Argentina!

sweet ending! i thought more was gonna happen, but i'm glad you finished well.