Lorenzo and Kayla

Hello!
Maybe this review comes many years later from the finishing date...but I love it!, so much that I finish it in two days xD
I love the way you write, how the characters develop between them, the beautifull couple of Yami and Yugi (puzzleshipping!) and,the magic given by the base idea of that chapter in xxxHolic (I like that manga too! :D )
I read others fanfincs from you ("No More", "Into the west", "Bond of Flame", among others..) and really like the way you write.
Maybe you can write other stories ), I'll gladly follow them..

Blessings from Chile
Catalina

I dunno what to say... But, good story?... Yeah good story!

Love, love, love it!

...is that lady doing something to yuugi?... THAT BITCH BETTER NOT BE! I'll fight yami for him!

Yay~ A nice way to end a weekend after toiling on the sadistic homework assigned by my evil teachers, but what else can you expect from school :p

w Yay for someone who understands basic concepts of grammar!

Until next time, with much love

~Naomie

Good story! Make some more!

*THAT* WAS COMPLETELY BRILLIANT!

You really awe me with your writing style, and you're quite passionate about your work. It's... intoxicating.

I'm sad to see this fic end, but I think if you had continued it on any further, it would have ruined it.

Oh, and on a note...

OMG! RYOU! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH AND YOU WROTE HIM SO WELL!

I'm sorry for capslocking so much, but I couldn't believe. The way you wrote Ryou... so knowledgeable... it was almost frightening, in this completely he-is-so-freaking-sexy-intelligent way. _ Heh, sorry. Ryou is my favorite character.

This was brilliant! It had such wonderful points of drama, and sadness, and happiness, and EVERYTHING WAS GREAT!

Now, I really must go find another fic to match it... or at least one to try...

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write.

Wicked

Wow. That was amazing. Great job! I liked how you included some Japanese but not too much and had the English meanings. I've never been able to find a translater that worked and it always stressed me out.

Thanks for the recomendation, I'll go read the fic you mentioned now. It's one I actually have been meaning to read, along with like thirty others...

Keep writing and I'll keep reading your stories. I think you kept all the charectors pretty true to how they really would act. I congradualate you. .

Hey, wow. This is such a great story. You've done a great job including those quotes (thanks for posting where you got them from). I am amazed at how you weave this story together, and I love how Ryou comes into play. I love how you display emotions explicitly, like "Yami growled, very agitated" instead of saying "he was angry" blah. I also like the interaction b/w the woman, Yugi and Atemu. They're pretty realistic. You've done such an amazing job with this story. Wow.

Wow, this chapter almost made me cry. It's so heartwrenching. Wow.

...I loved this story. *squeals* It was beautiful. I wish I could say more. But my brain is basically mush right now. Extremely well written, wonderful pace, arrgh! Just wonderful! Loved it so... *snuggles* I'm so sad it's over, but the ending was great! *sighs happily* LOVED IT...

Hi! Great story I'm very addicted!

1) Syaorin Li and Sakura Haruno or Kinomoto in English!

2) Tsubasa and Cardcaptor Sakura! (?)

You know what's weird? I'm listening to the Backstreet Boys the one I was listening to while reading was called 'Quit Playin' Games with my Heart,' and the one i'm listenin' to now is called 'As Long As You Love Me.' I think it's kinda weird i'm listening to songs on love while reading this! Oh well, it gives the story deeper meaning and emotion behind the actual words.