wow, im reading this 12 years after it was published... williz, i love this story so much! i especially enjoy the sections about the early days of their relationship.

put sex in detail plz

omg! u r so evil!

Reading your story, again! :) such an amazing connection you have created between these two! Where ever you are, please pick up the metaphorical pencil and write again?

Ok...but strange. It's also a tad depressing, but i like it. I wish u could hav found a way 4 will 2 keep his smithy open full time!

Loved he Barbie! :) lol

Oh my god, the cookie! I actually tested up-no lie! PLEASE I know u probably aren't got in o read this but continue...for me?

Fantastic! Love this, love u!

I really enjoyed reading this story! Plus, it helped me to improve my english which isn't my mother tongue, so...thank you ;P

Im really enjoying reading this story and want to know what happens next.

Brilliant story! I read this story a long time ago, but I felt like re-reading it again today. It's just as good as the last time as I read it! Anyway... LOL! Only Will and Elizabeth would get arrested on their wedding night. XD Of course, only Jack would through them an after party after their reception so they would get drunk even though they originally planned to leave the party so they could get it on in their hotel room, hehe. Completely different from the other Willabeth wedding nights I read, but I laughed and loved it. :D

Great story!

You certainly are one crazy lady. That's a first, I have to admit; getting arrested on your wedding night.

Fantastic, loved it! Best Will/Elizabeth modern au I've read yet.

love it cant wait too see what happens next

Doll, you MUST update soon! I'm seriously feeling major deprivation from your story. I absolutely adored this. Please update soon!