| Reviews for Deception |
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MagicalGirl95 chapter 1 . 5/25 Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Deception! Starring: Hermione Granger as 007, Bill Weasley as M The Weasley Twins as Q and Draco Malfoy as Goldfinger ;) Great fanfic so far |
R.R chapter 51 . 3/25 Although I find it unlikely that Bill would head the order and Draco would become a head death book is fantastic and a gripping read.I love the dramione moments and banters.I am love this story and hope that you write many more stories like this. |
Whit96 chapter 57 . 7/28/2018 Loved it! |
MitsukaiYuki chapter 31 . 3/14/2018 ...I give up. I can’t read anymore. Everything turned to sht the moment Hermione started showing attraction to Draco which was the early chapters omg. This chapter, 31, that reunion with Draco was very stupid. I’m sorry. I’m usually not this critical but I am fed up. Out of all the fics I’ve read, this is not one of the worst since I even made it to 31 and the story is actually good had it not been for the pathetic characters you’ve made, ESPECIALLY Hermione. Shallow, hypocrite, pathetic, lame, narcissist, STUPID and more. I am not writing all these to insult. I am stating FACTS. I even wish this stupid character gone. The only character you did right imo(based out of the 31 chapters I’ve read only) is BLAISE ZABINI. Only Blaise has been great so far. In fact, Blaise is the only good thing in here! Oh, the action scenes and the torture is great too. Sorry. I had to say all that and now I’m satisfied. I could say that this has been a waste of my time but I would be lying. There are some parts that are enjoyable too. |
MitsukaiYuki chapter 27 . 3/13/2018 I’m sorry but I think your Hermoine is a hypocrite. A slut as well although a naive one. I mean, She’s judging the couple who saved her and provided a temporary roof over her head for being deserters when just some chapters ago, she was desperate to escape from everything with Draco. As for calling her a slut, I can’t give a better example than this: Everyone’s TOUCHING her and she’s fine with it. I’m actually a little surprised that she even felt disgusted when Bill made a move on her! I just wish this will change since I’m still in the mid chapters. |
Guest chapter 57 . 2/19/2018 This was awesome, great job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2017 Dear Hermione, Here, go be a slut "for the greater good". Hope your vagina doesn't have odd things like morals stuck up in there! Ha! Really, shoo - go fuck a death eater so a lazy writer can bang out a "titillating", "tawdry", "sensational" story!11! Vats of seething smut draws ALL THE REVIEWS!11! |
R chapter 31 . 11/23/2017 I’m going to stop reading this story now bcoz you just made it look like “rape” for forgivable. That is messed up, plz think about your views again. |
Dulce Muerte chapter 57 . 10/22/2017 really liked this story, the biggest mistake I noticed was you accidently changed Jake's wife's name from Lisa to Sarah in the last few chapters she's mentioned. |
FlyingMouse chapter 57 . 6/27/2017 Epic. Well done, I'm so glad I got the opportunity to read through such an engrossing and hilarious story! This has definitely become one of my favorite Dramione fics! |
FlyingMouse chapter 39 . 6/24/2017 Phew...that was a relief... |
FlyingMouse chapter 38 . 6/24/2017 Nooooo Blaise, please don't be dead... |
FlyingMouse chapter 37 . 6/24/2017 Awww I love McGonagall! Always so prim but very understanding |
FlyingMouse chapter 25 . 6/23/2017 Damn...O_O |
FlyingMouse chapter 21 . 6/23/2017 Oh my gosh I'm in love with this story so much and up to this point, it's getting even more engrossing! I'm so happy Draco actually loves Hermione for herself _ Someone definitely needs to make a fanart photo of "Hermione, Ron, and Harry vs Hermione, Draco, and Blaise" 3 |