Excellent! That was an extremely unique and very interesting Superman story that had me glued to my screen for hours. Fantastic job! Kudos to you! :D

After reading a forgotten number of reveal or discover stories and poor ol Lois' reactions I gotta say, "How does it feel when the shoe's on the other foot, Clark?" Smug sob don't know if he's coming or going, but for sure he's not as special as he thought he was. Good for you, well played.

OMG! ,the kiss of death, the old wrong name during sex debacle. I love that it was Lois, especially this Lois, probably my least favorite of all the LoI, back to the 50's tv, which had 2. The cartoon Lois was always good, and of course, Margot(THE voice)Kidder.

This is a fabulous piece! There's some great stuff in L&C and the other 3-4 others I follow, but this is best of class and certainly in the running for best of show. This is extremely well written and riveting. So far different from other in L&C as to be in a class by itself. A favorite for sure, and I will read it in its entirety this weekend. I like to do reviews the second, third and fourth reading, so first time I leave myself plenty of space. This one I know for sure I will read and review for quite some time! Thank you and congratulations on a spectacular piece. Now sleep then off to your profile to see what else you've got in store.

Off to read missing.

Are the James Bond comments reference to the fact that Adam West (Batman actor) was offered the role of James Bond but declined saying that it can only be played by a British person?

Great story

I Love it It a great story.

A very good story!One could 'see themselve's''get married in it!Now,all one has to do is...get or make a cake!Complete with frosting on the side!From;Betsye

Dear Sir,It would remind one of their own marriage...were they ever lucky to get ,if they were married year's ago.I was married way back in 1995,so,that's why this story remind's me of that 'lucky I talked to my step-daughter after a cousin's wedding this May,she plan's to marry 'someday,but not right now.''Because,she want's to travel to other place' ever,Betsye./I'm afraid,I have already traveled to Europe,so,am not really sorry that I haven't gone to Europe, was way back in the summer of 1988,and 1992,that I went to Carlisle England and ,France.

A very interesting story!For someone like me,who had a lot of trouble writing a story(I'm no Jane Austen!),I'm very glad that someone else can write a good story!From;Betsye

I always enjoy your stories. This one is no different.

One of these days you have got to write the story of how Bruce and Clark met.

A great alternative story. You've really kept my interest. I loved the description of Esther & Clark's Roman Catholic wedding. It brought back many happy memories. Please keep up the great writing, find your muse & continue the stories that you have in progress.

I absolutely loved it. I've never really read any Clark/OC stories but I adored this one and didn't want it to end. Great job!

i know you wrote this years ago. but it was a great story. i really loved it. I hope your still writing after all theses year.