HYUGA ENERGICO

This was a really good story its just sad it died right before it got truly awesome! I was really looking forward to Haran revealing himself to the world!

It would've been better if he had frgured out he was a hyuuga, during a battle or somwthing, then asked the Hokage about it, and he reaponded with removing the seal and given a letter from the Fourth and hIs Father

i hate the way this was executed, especially how early it was revealed to naruto he was a hyuuga. it's just not an exciting story and the excitement the plot should have isn't there at all

...Wut

Good please add more

You could give him water, wind, lightning, and earth affinity.

y u no updating?! I love this story...

I love you for starting this story. I hate for not updating. Please continue this story sometime and stop leaving is in suspense.

this is a great story. Hope you continue writing this

This is very interesting I hope you'll continue this sometime. The concept of Naruto being Hinata's twin is very original and how you set it up to be very plausible. I really like how you arranged the teams, it made for an interesting read and good for Ino that she snapped out of her fangirl phase. I always wondered how her father allowed her that when he was head of TI and she is supposed to be a heiress.
And no stupid crush on Sakura! that secured many brownie points in my book.
The only thing I hated was Haku's death he is one of my favourites in the Naruto Verse, it was as you said a tragic death. T.T
Now the only thing I never get is the Hyuuga Clan Council/Elders. It's clear it's them that have the real power within the clan and so they are obviously unmarked, but all children but the heir of the main family are branded with the caged seal so following that logic the only elder without the seal should be Hiashi and Hizashi's father. So there must be other members of the main family that don't get marked how the hell do they justify the need to brand either Hinata or Hanabi(in this case Haran too)? Sorry about that rant it's just been weighing on my mind. So frustrating.

So much for trying to update faster lol but this is really good hope you continue!

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Aaaa pitier nooonnn elle est genial pourquoi l'abandonner?
vas tu la reprendre?

WE GET IT! STOP SCREAMING! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!