Reviews for The Visit
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 15 . 8/31/2019
A great story so far here! General O'Neill won't let Lt. Colonel Sheppard get Dishonorably Discharged, right?
SGAsuperfan496 chapter 15 . 5/25/2018
Please finish this story. I'd love to see how General Sheppard gets what is coming to him.
Jerry K chapter 3 . 6/9/2015
That General Sheppard is coming across as a real glassbowl-which I gather is your point! I have this hysterical feeling reminding me of a game called "Gother than Thou" in which the scariest card is "Mom's Visit". Maybe General Sheppard has played the game...?
kenbotkt chapter 15 . 11/8/2013
Any chance that this story is ever going to be finished?
Guest chapter 15 . 9/6/2013
Hi!

I really liked your fanfiction!
Don't take this the wrong way, but I found a mistake with the names. You wrote Atosian instead of Cordian people.
I liked your idea of getting even with Generel Sheppard. Hope he gets what he deserves.
Lstly I hope that an update will come soon. So far you did a really great work.
Thank you for your sharing this story with us readers!

By!
SGAmvmm chapter 15 . 2/18/2012
This was great.. I love Xmen especially SGA.. I hope you continue writing this.. Thank you for writing this one.. )
locutes chapter 15 . 8/6/2011
please update soon
jnut13 chapter 15 . 6/3/2011
so i just saw this story a couple of days ago...its really good. i know its been a while since you updater but you should definitely consider writing more chapters
lancelot.knight chapter 15 . 12/1/2010
well one thing i can say is that sometime in the future (if you don't abandon this story) is that i would love to see forge get bumped over to atlantis! i can just imagine what that guy could do

especially with all the atlantis tech to play with hell even with just a couple of naquadah generators!
tink8098 chapter 15 . 10/14/2010
I found out about your story when I was at a Stargate convention back in August. People are still talking about this story, even though you haven't updated in so long. I hope you finish. This is a really good story.
Grayson's Redoubt chapter 15 . 7/30/2010
Hey, nice job with this! Will it be finished?
P-90 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Marvel comics and the Stargate universe are my favourites, combining the two is awesome, thanks.
steamfan chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
As you have turned off your private message function, I'm answering your question here. Yes, the Neither Heaven nor Hell verse is open to all writers. As to more stories, there is only a one shot currently called 'She Knows' and is about Buck and Inez. Thank you very much for reading Curse of the Seven and enjoying it enough to ask about it.

Annette:

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B.E.W chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Could you please finish the story is driving me insane wondering if the two Sheppard's get on better terms!

Please! Save me from myself?
B.E.W chapter 15 . 5/7/2010
What happens next? its really good
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