nice! a bit of a drastic change.. it being abit longer would have been nicer :/ but eh, whatever, I stil enjoyed it :D

aww it was so cute and sweet! loved it all the way through! absolutely loved this! loved the ending! thanks for writing .

Very very sweet, and I like the ending.

-Knight 03 x

So cute!

I loved the ending :)

That was a good story!

I think that in a way it was good that it ended the way it did, if it had not James would have probably said something about how he was even right about Snape and they could have gotten into an argument. Again.

I enjoyed reading the story!

I hope that you will have a good day!

Aw, that was a really cute story. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job.

Its sweet, but... I think it end abruptly! You did capture the characters well though! :P :D

hmm yeah my computer glitched or something and automatically sent my last review unfinished... boo! lol. I love this story! it's so short and simple yet it's written so beautifully i feel all warm and fuzzy when i read it. yay! :-)

WOW! That was just amazing! i can't even pick a favorite part cuz it was all so amazing

x3 That is such a beautiful ending. It's sweet.

*keels over*

Your work is so amazing. I can't even think of critique for you - just praise. I love this piece to bits.

cute.

Perfectly written. I love it.

ends abruptly but SO WHAT? its perfect the way tis.

i like but...?