that was amazing. sooooooo goood!

~fyrewyre

Woohoo, by coincidence I see this story again and I'm all, oh dang, she isn't dead after all, and it's pretty much huzzah. I can't wait to see what the hell is going on; it's all very suspenseful and extremely sexy too! Keep writing, love!

omg. i read this story a long time ago but completely forgot what it was called and where to find it.

im so glad i finally stumbled on it again. Please, please update soon. i really hope that you didn't drop this story. its really good.

Yay! Nice to see an update. I've never seen that film, but that's an interesting fact. heh, I know all about long delays in updating...:P I've been meaning to update my first fic for over half a year now...

Interesting. Will there be more?

Wow. That was a lot of info. Tiny tiny objection. Please don't romanticize the republicans of the Spanish civil war. They were probably worse than the nationalists. The poor spanish had a choice between fascism-lite in the form of the nationalists or communism all the way if the republicans had won as they were totally co-opted by soviet russia. Very bad is the best you can do if the only other choice is truly horrible.

Well, enough of that. I like long chapters filled with a lot of info, a full picture of another universe like you present.

That was another excellent chapter, Hope you update soon. Though it seems the damn alert system seems to be down again.

Sweet baby Jesus!

This is looking to be a might fine story.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

-Queen of the Gnomes,

NumbuhZero

Excellent chapter. Raven doesn't look happy. Hope you update soon.

Now THAT is the way to write an exciting action sequence! Particularly shocking were the fates of Rouge and Roy... Roy especially, the simple, quick, matter-of-fact way it was written out. It takes something just that extreme to really sympathize with how our poor revolutionary heroes have become cold-blooded killers. Clearly it's a world where anyone can die at any time if they're unlucky or not doing their best. Well done.

Amazing. I just read through your entire story in one sitting and did not even notice the passing time. You have a skill for world building, and this "Brave New World" for the Titans is wonderfully developed and believable. I can't wait to read more!

pretty interesting story i can't wait to see where it goes

Col, keep going, I hope Raven is allright. update soon

Another excellent chapter, nice to see an update. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Good stuff. Sorry I haven't reviewed some chapters. This is interesting.