Reviews for The Talented and the Secretive
Guest chapter 11 . 10/2/2017
Naruto and Sasuke got together, but other than that, nothing else was resolved. Itachi is still a danger to Sasuke, and Naruto still has poor control over the 9-tails.
Guest chapter 9 . 10/2/2017
Did Naruto really say "I don't think Itachi means that much of a trouble. Sure he killed your family..."? That's like saying, "I know Jack the Ripper is a serial killer, but he's not a bad guy." LMAO! It's OK that Itachi is a mass murderer, I'm sure he means well!

I wish the talents and abilities part of the story was explained better. How doe the kids in the fic happen to come by their powers? Why was it necessary to give them powers to begin with and not make the school into a military academy if you waned an excuse to make them do practice sparring? Their powers haven't done much for the plot of the fic.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/2/2017
Naruto is pretty chill for someone who just discovered that the friend that he thought he /killed/ is not only alive and well, but also the person he's currently frenemies with.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2017
This chapter was supposed to make us hate Sasuke, but it made me hate Naruto instead. Naruto got possessive over Sakura within 60 seconds of meeting her. He had absolutely no right to feel angry that she likes someone else. He should have let it go, instead he decided to hate the guy Sakura likes before he'd ever met him. We're supposed to feel sorry for Naruto that he's had a sad past and people are prejudiced against him. but what he did to Sasuke was the literal definition of prejudging someone. Worst of all, instead of keeping his feelings to himself, Naruto immediately got in Sasuke's face the second he walked through the door. How does Naruto know Sasuke thinks he's god and all the other stupid stuff he accused him of? Naruto doesn't know anything about Sasuke, but that didn't stop him from becoming belligerent toward a person who'd never done anything to him. Why are Naruto's bullies awful people for doing that to Naruto, but Naruto isn't an awful person when he acts that way toward other people?

Sasuke was rude to Naruto back, but what he said was in response to Naruto, a complete stranger, getting in his face and hurling accusations. He was provoked into lashing out.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/22/2015
So...Are we just ignoring the fact that Naruto has a demon that will eventually take over his soul? If his will power wasn't enough before, what is going to stop him again? Also, Naruto KILLED PEOPLE! There is no way that isn't going to get at least a lawsuit.
Evangeline039 chapter 11 . 4/5/2015
Wish it to be longer for each chapter though .. but it's a nice story! Keep writing! Ganbatte :)
keytomyheartmyimmortal chapter 11 . 10/17/2012
the story was good but the epilogue was too short and plain
fullmoon123 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
i like it
Lexus chapter 11 . 6/19/2009
Too bad it ended but really good though.
x-ClinicallyInsane-x chapter 8 . 4/23/2009
Sasuke said "At least I'm dead."

did he mean "At least I'm not dead."?
Pink Tubby Custard chapter 11 . 4/15/2009
Great story! Luved it! the ending was hapy 2! glad tht everything turned out well at the end!
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 11 . 9/25/2008
Nice story!
Joor immaginary friend paul D chapter 2 . 9/25/2008
AHAHAHAHAHA! Kyuubi called Tsunade a mortal in the first chapter! XD XD XD XD haha lol nice! fantabulous story by the way! Very creative!
mangatemptresshikaru chapter 11 . 9/3/2008
Aw, this story is so cute! I think you should make a sequel to it, I want to know what happened with Sasuke and Itachi. There were a few gaps left with that. Otherwise, this story was excellent. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
shunsuke.sensei chapter 3 . 9/1/2008
yay! the storyy is so KAWAI! but im not sure they're age...-.-"
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