Oh my God! I hope you come back soon to finish this fic. It's really good!

Okay, your author's note at the top of this chapter let's me know the fic gets even more unbelievable in regards to abuse. So I guess I should stop reading?

Seriously though, how can we possibly believe that Harry survived on so little food up to this point? And don't say magic, because that don't cut it. If Harry gets no actual meals in his life, he would be dead. End of story.

Look, I get it. You want to portray Harry as terribly abused. But abusers really aren't THAT stupid. They make sure their victim gets enough food to be able to function and always make sure there are no VISIBLE signs of abuse and neglect. Harry would be an emaciated scarecrow, AT BEST, and steps would be taken to remove him from that environment. Obliviations or not. Dumbles would be there DAILY trying to get Harry back with the Dursleys!

Make it more believable and I'll gladly come back and read.

I'm having a difficult time believing the abuse was this bad. If it had been, Harry wouldn't have survived to this age. Honey, you need to make it believable. This isn't.

really, really would like to see more of this story! I think it is the best of the "future knowledge" genre I have read. Please write more.

1) best use of an actually magical curse used against someone
too much of treating magic as a different technology in both canon and fanfiction
2) boggart excellent!

I wish you wouldn’t bash your writing - it’s really quite good. Just finished Demon and your concept of the schools of magic was fascinating and well described. Looking forward to this one (even tho I see it’s incomplete). Thank you for your work!

To the cowardly anon who last reviewed this, if that BS can even be called a review:

Up yours.

I wish you would write more

Thank you, this story is really good. Please continue writing as I would love to see how it finishes
Thanks!

Ahh! A 4 year cliffy! Not an abandoned story, I hope.

Knowing this isn't finished- and May Never be finished, is sad. It's really a true gem in the ff realm.

I hope you get back to this someday.

What a fascinating story. Well done. If anyone didn’t like it...sucks to be them.

plz finish or re-write

It's a shame there's no more story after this. The writing, prose, and dialogue were amazing . And this story is extremely underrated . It's creative and doesnt fall into exposition heavy tropes a lot of fanfics fall into . Or at least it has heavy exposition done in a way that fits the story . I hope you come back to this some day . Til then , we'll be here rooting for you :)