| Reviews for Picnic |
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   MorgantheFae chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 I love the look into Doumeki's thought process. My favorite part was how he scored Watanuki's faceplants, but the whole thing was just brilliant. The way food figured predominantly is pure Doumeki. |
| Lyrasloon chapter 1 . 6/6/2012 Can...not stop laughing ... Lol. Too funny. |
| softdreamer chapter 1 . 1/13/2011 it was nice and had me giggling through the whole story XD good work |
| memories.of.rain chapter 1 . 7/16/2010 I really loved reading this. If you ever feel like it, maybe you could write a future with Watanuki as a mother and Doumeki as a father. Anyway, GREAT JOB! _ |
| obvious things are obvious chapter 1 . 3/25/2010 ahahaha really hilarious! and you can't deny it, watanuki really would make a good mother.. XD and i can't even cook for the life of me.. -_- good job! - |
| Grissina chapter 1 . 9/5/2009 I think it's sweet and intelligent, and it keeps very well the characters in their place. Thanks for sharing it. |
| Angel of Lavender chapter 1 . 1/12/2009 “There’s something going on in that head of yours. I don’t want to know what it is. Ever." Completely and utterly lovely. I adore this! And I LOVE that Watanuki doesn't blush. It seems better that its onsided. At least for now. (yes, I know its a oneshot, but I can write the rest in my head if I want.) So great! |
| nightmarewings chapter 1 . 12/4/2008 Haha, that was so cute. Doumeki is so much fun, messing with Wata-chan like that. Fufufufuf "wata-chan" heh messing with Watanuki seems like so much fun. I with I could too! _ |
| aisty chapter 1 . 11/2/2008 This is to cuute~! Thanks for sharing the story! |
| yuMeNami chapter 1 . 10/14/2008 all i can say is that. GOOD JOB! hahhahaha..i can imagine watanuki's face! OH MY GOD! I can't stop laughing..if i can roll on the floor laughing..i probably would! hahaha |
| dragontwin99 chapter 1 . 9/29/2008 cute :) |
| Never Believe the Believable chapter 1 . 9/6/2008 *Grins* You gotta love Doumeki. That was hilarious; wonderfully done. It really DOES make you wonder how Doumeki thinks. Especially when it comes to our ever adorable Watanuki - Hehe. |
| Anyjen chapter 1 . 6/8/2008 That was great! XD I loved it, I loved it! Poor Watanuki, being harassed by Doumeki's mental processes... I loved how important food is in Doumeki's POV, enough that entire descriptions and arguments revolve around it. Like "He said nothing. Good soup shouldn’t be wasted after all.", instead of thinking that that would really hurt. XD And mean Doumeki, he had to enlist Himawari's help at the end. I also loved how he grades Watanuki's face-plants. |
| moulin noir chapter 1 . 1/20/2008 wow that actually made me laugh out loud ... thanx _ |
| uh chapter 1 . 12/27/2007 XD You can't deny it, Nuki-chan! XD |
