This is a weird intro a story it has some crazy misty being a Pikachu and kissing. This weirdest opening to a story

That was interesting...

A plot twist inside a plot twist

Best story ever but poor xander and ash

you are a moron all pokémon can hatch and lay eggs and pokémon don't follow real animals because they are from aanime/game

you got team aqua wrong it's not team agua it's a.q.u.a not a.g.u.a

You... You...YOU BASTARD! HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THIS?! SUCH AN ENDING IS UNACCEPTABLE!

plz

whaaaaat lucario can talks to ze humans? in the submarine?

Ha I don't like the idea of ash forgetting about he's own son because no one can forget there own child onls he or she was evil

Professor mother-friggen Oak.
Well then.

I enjoyed most of the story, until the last 2 or maybe 3 chapters. You started leaving questions unanswered from the middle of the story already, and I think that made a lot of people mad. Worst of all, you had to rush the ending, leaving the story halfway to its actual completion, and you preferred to end it right there because convenience.
Here's, more or less, my reaction when I was done: "Yeah but... Why did this story even existed... It didn't leave anything in the characters, nor in the reader... There's.. THERE'S GOT TO BE ANOTHER CHAPTER!"
This wasn't an epilogue at all, this chapter's only purpose was to leave the reader with a bitter taste in their mouth. For the sake of this story: make a sequel (Or some REAL epilogue with all the explanations you owe us from start to finish).
Sorry for the rude comment, but a good amount of people think it this way.

make a sequel, make a sequel!, Make A Sequel!, MAKE A SEQUEL!

you know how in one sonic shorts tails makes sonic a watch and eggman sends them a message and you see sonics look? well, thats the look im doing right now

first sex now, ash, who's like 10 years old, is having a kid